|Reviews for The story of Uzumaki Naruto|
| Squarekiddo chapter 7 . 1/30
Im done, this is simply to hard to read, like a list/book report, theres no emotions, and theres so very little logic, I mean you can say that Naruto is mature all day long, but for Anko to classify a 13 year old boy as a young man is simply wrong, and honestly? rather creepy, she was 23/24 years old according to you, and shes falling for a 13 year old after 6 months simply because she feels comfortable in his presence? newsflash mate, thats some seriously shallow reasonings, honestly this romance feels like its written by someone who dosnt really have a good grasp on love, then again I guess I could be wrong, I dont feel Ive ever been in love for real, just the normal teenage things you have during school.
| Squarekiddo chapter 6 . 1/29
The Rasengan is not Wind affinity based.
| Squarekiddo chapter 4 . 1/29
I do like the general story.
The story does read rather odd though, sort of like a list, or a book report, it doesn't really seem to flow when reading it.
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/20
Just kill sasugay already
| sonicthehedgehog240 chapter 45 . 1/4
Talk about an excellent story. I wish there was more. I hoped to see Naruto would kill orochimaru, kabuto and take back sasuke. I also wish that he fought against iron ox guy. But any way great story.
| xNaruHina chapter 20 . 1/3
This story was amazing up until the end of this chapter when Anko went from being an amazingly sweet and gentle girlfriend to threatening Naruto and having a kunai near his crotch. Even if she feared for his life she shouldn't have gone that far. The scene after was pretty sweet but if she is threatening stuff like that then she will just make worse threats in the future. That and maybe fufill them and that is not okay. Abuse should not be in any relationship no matter what form it takes.
| xNaruHina chapter 17 . 1/3
They had a month to train so why not just have Naruto figure out the sequence for the Hiraishin?
| xNaruHina chapter 16 . 1/3
You said that Naruto understood that a shinobi uses EVERY tool available to them that will constitute to winning and protecting his precious people yet in this chapter you show him blatantly refusing to use a tool that could very well end up protecting his precious people...
| xNaruHina chapter 12 . 1/3
Just a few things I noticed this and last couple chapters. NiiChan is spelled with two i's, when writing time separate the hours and minutes by a colon: e.g, 11:30 A.M, and you never did go into describing their first time making love together .-. that would have been very beautiful I am sure. :/
| xNaruHina chapter 3 . 1/2
Yayy I like this story so far. Naruto is off to a great start and Anko seems to be different in this story than most. She isn't going to beat up on him as much just for the sake of doing that. So she isn't going to treat him like the villagers do..she will actually treat him like a human and emphasize with him since she has a similar background yeah? A gentle/caring Anko is a very refreshing thing :)
| NaruHinaOTP chapter 2 . 1/2
Do you know how fucking terrible taekwando is?! Why not Muay Thai? That's 100% more deadly. Most of taekwando kicks are just for shows or are flashy and would be risky in a real battle.
| draco7347 chapter 45 . 12/29/2015
cant wait for the sequal
| InfernoChomp4444 chapter 26 . 12/23/2015
| DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
a lot of things has been revealed to Naruto in this 1st chapter, let's see what's going to happenn in the 2nd chapter!
Congratulations for your fic, i expect a lot of action, drama and romance in this story!
| XxxLover chapter 45 . 12/1/2015
what the hell where is the rest?