Reviews for The story of Uzumaki Naruto
ShadowSnake22 chapter 45 . 2/8
Lovely story it should definitely be continued
Nalini-Singh175 chapter 9 . 2/5
While i love this idea and this story, I find myself being pushed out of the story. And I know why, its very easy to fall into the habit of "telling the story well" and while this form of writing is effective it also does a good job of not sucking a reader in. What i think you need to ask your self is in what areas of my story can i afford toShow the story well" many fanfiction writers fall into this telling habit. and i reckon its because its already been shown. We already know what Everything is supposed to look like. But fanfiction is where people can change the way the original story is told and by showing us how you changed the story and not Telling us how. im sure it will be so much easier to get absorbed into the world u created. I hope I helped, Happy writing
Guest chapter 20 . 1/26
I'm rolling with you. You definitely changed some things but if I didn't like that I wouldn't read fan fiction. One thing that I would have liked to see though were more parts where Anko showed her sadistic mask so it was clear that only naruto and Kurenai saw the real her.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 45 . 1/17
well that was awesome shame it's over though or is it
YeagerMeister31 chapter 44 . 1/16
well i really enjoyed that chapter a nice battle some infiltration some flirting what's not to like who wouldn't be jealous wonder what happens when Konoha finds out about what Naruto and Jiraiya did Sasuke would probably cry like a baby if he heard
YeagerMeister31 chapter 43 . 1/16
well this was nice chapter and quite interesting
YeagerMeister31 chapter 42 . 1/16
well this was a cool chapter the fight scene reminded me of Resident Evil fighting Lickers lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 41 . 1/16
well although this wasn't very action packed it was enjoyable plus it's good to hear about Minato it was funny i also loved the Naruto stealing all the girls part and Jiraiya sulking it just cracks me up when i read stuff like that
YeagerMeister31 chapter 40 . 1/16
well that was a nice chapter sad in moments of course who wouldn't be when ya boyfriend is leaving for 3 years. Still the beating of Jiraiya was awesome can't wait for more and i wonder how strong everyone will be when he returns
YeagerMeister31 chapter 39 . 1/15
well that was a badass fight Naruto won awesome about time he whoops Sasgay's ass
YeagerMeister31 chapter 38 . 1/15
nice chapter SakuHina teamed up well and kicked ass as did Shino, Kiba & Akamaru shame Tayuya died so easily
YeagerMeister31 chapter 37 . 1/15
well another interesting chapter i love how all the genin are getting stronger and all the jonin are helping also Kakashi is not up Sasuke's ass like he is in alot of the stories I've read wonder what's gonna happen next
Guest chapter 45 . 1/12
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YeagerMeister31 chapter 36 . 1/14
it was an interesting chapter not as fast paced as the last but that's understandable. so sasgay's defecting weak brat
YeagerMeister31 chapter 35 . 1/14
another great chapter some good fighting plus Naruto vs Stone Ox was a great fight can't wait for the rematch and the sound 5 aye should be interestitng
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