Reviews for The story of Uzumaki Naruto |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...kick uchiha ass..kick his lapdogs' ass...blow up half f the exam...for fun of course.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bravo and i like the stragey you thougt up against the inuzaka guy keep up the good work and i hope u update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() change the phrase "precious peoples" it pisses me off and dosent fit in with the naryto universe in and shape or form nor in any other dimesion of thinking remember that while this is your own story in truth u wouldnt have written it if it wasnt for the real naruto anime so pay it some respect and do a great big shit on the phrase "presiouse people" apart from that bravo great sttory u should be proud of hwt youve done |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice, please keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant wait till the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() going great so far keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting how well thought out this story is. I can see Naruto and Kiba fighting and getting along, though I hope you don't rush Hinata to be strong just for Naruto. I do enjoy reading this story and hope you update soon. Until then. Ja ne |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far. I do still need to keep reading but I like it. You made me think really about people and why they are who they are. I agree that the Naruto and Anko in the book would not get along and like this version of them. I do want to give you Kudos and hope that you finish this story. -Liz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of this story! But making Anko go out of character is hard to read, because the Anko in the Anime is a lot more u know blood lusting. But i will keep reading so keep up the good work. O and also u should have Ero-sennin teach Naruto advance sealing, summoning...and so on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking forward to sunday so i can read the wave arch |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant my dear Watson I look forward to more...I dont think your making Naruto To powerful after all...I have to ask if your going to toy with and add Kyuubi? that would be interesting to see how you use him in this...will they merge and make Naruto a 1/2 demon...will Kyuubi agree to be more hospitable to Naruto...what gender will you make the Fox Demon and so on...look forward to more soon! Ja Ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, but you could have added a match between Shino and Hinata fighting Naruto so they could get a handal, Like you stated Naruto knows about the clans an all but he actually never saw it in an actual fight, but all in all it was a good chapter, I enjoyed it. Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it was a good idea to skip the training but there are still some issues. One would be the 'forced' moments you have between Naruto and Anko. I don't mean to be a jerk but some of the romantic development is... monotone. You could improve by actually doing something like, an embarrising moment. Those are used sometimes to bring charcters closer affectionatly. Another would be Anko. I know you have other people saying she's too OOC and you responded with "She's letting go of her mask." or something of that nature. I think that would be a great idea... if it was done right.(No offense) In your fic, the mask was never up. It's always "Yes sir." or "Hidly ho, nieghbor!"... ok the last one was exaggerated but I hope you get the point. Most Anko stories have her bloodlust-y and insane. While I enjoy those, it's both refreshing and boring with your version. I think you want an Anko that's both nice and dangerous but she has to show that really "Anko side" that makes her so famous. A little seduction here, add some naughty there, and 'BAM' you have a better story. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Later. |