I see great things from this story. Not to mention that Anko is one of the coolest characters ever!

Well really can not say much about this chapter as I have read this chapter 1,0 times over you have changed a few things, but nothing differnet from 100 other stories. I look forward to the future chapters to see hoe things go.

Hm good stuff and is Anko going to be paired with Naruto? I hope so though if you do take this preprepared rant into consideration "I hate fics where people make Anko out to be a wh-re she's not and heres my reasoning for it. I don't think she'd have any old lovers. She is an emotionally fragile person and has serious trust issues and hates to be vulnerable which is why I believe she's so flirtatious she likes to be in control and lead poor fools on thinking they have a chance with her only to smash those hopes to bits. With the betrayal of Orochimaru she would hate being emotionally vulnerable and sex even if she picked some random guy up would make her somewhat emotionally vulnerable and require her to trust her lover which wont happen and she would never accept that, then you have the fact that she knows she's gorgeous so she'd have extremely high standards which no guy I can think of could match, except Naruto since he knows a similar pain what with the villages scorn. That leads to yet another reason her sleeping around is HIGHLY unlikely, she knows most people think lowly about her and most men would try to get into her panties because she's hot and sexy only to dump her once they got the 'prize' she's smart, sly, and devious and would be able to tell their intentions, which is why I don't think she'd be with any guys. Those are my reasons based on logic why Anko should and would be a virgin." Sorry for the rant but Anko is great and I hate her being portrayed in a negative way. Also Naruto will be really strong in the six months right? I mean Anko would make him work on speed taijutsu and have his kage bushins master chakra control as well as some jutsu no snake jutsu but jutsu none the less and I'd see her as one who'd have him work on his elemental affinity since she'd train him HARD.

a good sory so far has alot of protenal

great start.

nice