Reviews for The story of Uzumaki Naruto
grimme chapter 10 . 8/30/2022
sooo first off i realy like your plot and the events you put focus on but i feel that the charackters are kind of bland for example when you have anko and kurenai next to each other they should be polar opposites
your anko is so well spoken has good manners and a friendly personality it kind off makes me doubt that she got screwed up by orochimaru and is despised and feared in the village only second to naruto himself. psycho snake bitch was her inoffical nickname i believe.

but again your event structure and plot line is very well thought out and interesting.
amavgupta0 chapter 11 . 8/1/2022
bro who reveals their techniques to other people what's the meaning of being a shinobi if he doesn't know the meaning of deception and element of surprise like even telling your friends about the techniques he's learning to his friends you only tell your techniques to 1 or 2 people even if their are more people who you trust with your life and your saying he's a hidden genius or something that's pure dumb even most of the village didn't know which technique minato used for being so fast including the shinobi population they just thought he was that fast and was so cool or many people would have tried to find the counter to the technique when the nidaime reigned
Alexander work chapter 5 . 7/13/2022
Almost had me crying
EVIL-SAGE chapter 20 . 7/10/2022
i loved the fights and felt they were reasonable enough
alefrosier chapter 8 . 6/13/2022
It's really unrealistic Naruto's strength level he should be much stronger, in a single day of training his is equivalent to 3 months and ten days with 100 clones a day for 6 months he is training equivalent to more than 40 years is impossible him being so weak with so much training time is just not realistic, with such a serious mistake I'm dropping this story, have good luck
alefrosier chapter 7 . 6/13/2022
This author forgets that Naruto has shadow clones to speed up training and Naruto himself regenerates at high speed, so he can build muscle and speed at an unbelievable rate, other than that it's normal until Naruto gets older smart after all he is exercising his brain at a frantic pace with all this training with the clones, the fact is that Naruto would not be the first pre-teen much ahead of the others we have already seen this with Itachi and Kakashi, considering that Naruto can do 100 days of training in a single training day that for 6 months would be ridiculous if he wasn't at least at that level, 6 months with 100 clones everyday is a few years he should be much stronger than he is now
alefrosier chapter 6 . 6/13/2022
Where are the gravity seals and chakra paper, because Sasuke or Sakura would be stronger they will practically not interact with Naruto which would cause the change? and there's Kakashi himself being a horrible teacher, I intend team 8 to get stronger but others don't make sense, are you going to nerf Naruto? Because apart from Rock Lee and Gaara I don't see anyone at the level of the current Naruto,
I think Sakura only received Tsunade's training because of Naruto as a way of guaranteeing that he will stay alive, after all Tsunade must have seen Sakura's history and I don't see her without personal interest saying I'm going to turn this useless into something helpful, of course she is not one hundred percent to blame, Kakashi should have taught at least a few low and medium level genjutsus, but we never saw her run after learning.
alefrosier chapter 5 . 6/13/2022
No Uzumaki clan jutsu, the Uzumaki clan was huge almost the size of a large village and there is no lack of jutsus, taijutsu, fuuinjutsu and money, doubtful that Kushina went to konoha with just the clothes on her body, you forgot about the clan Uzumaki?
alefrosier chapter 4 . 6/13/2022
The story is going well despite the weapon forged cliché, one thing you got right was the chakra control, in my opinion supported by canon evidence, I think Naruto is a genius at chakra control, I remember the tree climbing exercise taught by Kakashi Naruto's chakra control was almost equal to Sasuke's taking into account the huge amount of Naruto's chakra is a beautiful feat, the speed in learning the rasengan, the problem is that Naruto had bad teachers, Kakashi didn't teach practically nothing and let's not even talk about the training trip, we saw the ridiculous results of Naruto's training he didn't even lose his dependence on clones to make the rasengan, he didn't learn any ninjutsu with the amount of his chakra his element doesn't matter.
alefrosier chapter 1 . 6/8/2022
Every time I see the phrase, my precious people make me want to throw up, what a ridiculous thing, I'm seeing that it's going to be another story of Naruto sucking the third hokage's balls, with that joke of being hokage with that retarded philosophy of embracing all hate , it must be a japanese thing MC's are always that dumb, you defeat your enemy and he becomes your best friend and don't kill no matter how bad the person you talk to the enemy and he regrets all his crimes.
fuunu chapter 45 . 5/1/2022
good story same no sequel
Tomahawk5763 chapter 6 . 4/27/2022
Chapter 5 made me cry
Guest chapter 45 . 4/9/2022
It's 2022 April 9th for me . When is the fanfiction continuing? I really hope this isn't a old post cus I rather enjoyed this.
Guest chapter 45 . 3/16/2022
So this is a really solid fanfic, just sad that there doesn't seem to be a continuation.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/5/2022
It would be easier to read if put in shorter paragraphs
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