The story/plot is amazing but the grammar and punctuation is so goddamn awful that it's such a chore to read.

what about the hirashin

Honest reasons

Best IDO I’ve read

That was a great piece of art. I hope that u will continue with this story

Bene bene vediamo che succede!

I bless u you provided me with such an amazing story

I love it you did great problay the best fanfiction i have read

bullshit! you can tell him (only him) yondaime was his parents so he has hope to continue live ,, also about his enemies? konohamaru is grandson of hokage can still live until know and what about hokage son? you fucking hokage and you said you pooooooor? his wife was fucking uzumaki clan founder and he said he was poooor?

so when he know his hero was his father and the person who sealed kyubi inside him i hope he will react with rational ("ooh because you are my hero and father i will forgive you and will become best hokage,,") i think naruto curse by his parent,, mother and father want to become hokage, please make new path go adventure, see the world, world is not only your village (frog in the well)

why the fuck he believe that,, if his parent true love him, he will not seal kyubi in him (with jin- treatments in other village and konoha itself,, assasin by other village like kushina),, and if naruto not his fater was 4th kage and kushina why the fuck he/she will make him contain the demon,,, Naruto please use your head

“His stamina is greater than hers.ʖ

Gotta say I was expecting more this is a grest story but its left unfinished with a *Complete* tag on it come on that's just false advertising,

I feel bad like we are bashing this no name game haha. Like what did he do to deserve this treatment

Ok they punched me either in the feels I love the outcome of the fight