|Reviews for To Grow Wings|
| dat anon chapter 7 . 12/25/2014
Did you abandone this fanfic ;_;
| TheFlaringFox chapter 7 . 8/17/2011
muhahahah plotting, betrayal...more plotting, silly name games, plotting,...did I mention plotting?
AWESHOME! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! MORE OF ZEE PLOTTING!
| TheFlaringFox chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
LOLOLOL I was reading another fic and I was like I know lei and her sister I swear ive heard these names before .
now I feel silly .
| nicegal1 chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
amazing story! its so good!
| Qwikshot chapter 6 . 12/5/2010
this just keeps getting better! i can't wait to read about the significance of the 13 bells and what the wench wants that she can't have
also, what's up with the link between cloud and lazard?
tyvm for sharing!
| Sarim chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
hey are u going to keep updating this story? hope u do XD
| harrylover101 chapter 5 . 8/26/2010
I really love the way this is going. It shows promise. I look forward to your next post eagerly.
| BananaPeaceMonkeyKarmi chapter 5 . 6/15/2010
Hey! I've been waiting for this!
I thought it was pretty decent. Wish there was more, but hey, you did what you could all I know is that you've definately got me wanting more :)
| City of Dis chapter 5 . 6/1/2010
and here i thought you'd rolled up and died in a corner somewhere with your muses holding a smoking gun...
...thats actually fairly scary thought...
umm...conversation in february...jesus thats a while back...im guessing i said something along those lines regarding lazard...either way i loled cause well thats pretty damn accurate.
now then i gotta go back and read some previous chapters to really get all it again...its been too long...but as far as i can tell again...Lei wants to do our little cloudy...granted...clouds always gunna be a little hung up on Tifa...but well..i figure he should get some experience before he goes for his goal...sides a little Cloud/OC never hurt anyone
anyway...sending him to the shit huh? i rather get the feeling hes gunna kick a serious amount of ass...probably before they ever get him to the camp...clouds never been the lucky sort...i bet they get shot down or something...and hes gunna save Fey's ass...and shes gunna save his...who knows maybe those two will hook up...well you do obviously
here in lies the question...why is shinra feel threatened by him? and if thats the case...why give him any kind of real life experience with the art of war instead of just outright killing him? ...well aside from the Sephy factor...
anyways i got some catching up to do in the reading department...
try not to make it a 4 month delay for the next chapter :P
| Mystic 777 chapter 5 . 5/30/2010
Hmm... a little odd, but this seems interesting. I'll see where you take it. Is there a Final Fantasy 12 character in this or did you just use the wrong Roman numeral in your end disclaimer? (I've never played 12 so I wouldn't know).
| Valth001 chapter 4 . 2/5/2010
pretty good please update soon
| ElvenStrife chapter 4 . 11/27/2009
This story is interesting, so far. You have some great ideas happening... the OC's fit in well... and the main characters are in character.
You haven't updated in awhile, though... are you still writing it? I would love to see how things progress, especially after the cliff-hanger you left us with...
I am going to beg you to update. Please?
I'm enjoying it so far! Thanks~
| sharingan-youkai chapter 4 . 5/30/2009
Awe I love this fic! You have so totally got to update it and soon! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! UPDATE DAMN YOU!
| secretgal chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
This story has some really interesting concepts, especially with the wings. I can't wait to see what comes next.
| LonelyRedTears chapter 4 . 3/27/2009
update soon i want 2 no wat's gonna happen 2 cloud plus add zack a little more like make him have something 2 do 2 wat's going on with cloud.
just an idea plus pleaze update back