Reviews for Making Love Out Of Nothing At All
AshleighRebekah chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Great story so far!
DayDreamer077 chapter 40 . 9/22/2012
i like both: nsync and backstreet boys! hopefully you got the new BSB album.
DayDreamer077 chapter 35 . 9/22/2012
love love pole dancing. It definitely builds your confidence and your upper body strength.
DayDreamer077 chapter 12 . 9/21/2012
hottest and funniest chapter.
DayDreamer077 chapter 8 . 9/20/2012
DayDreamer077 chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
i definitely remember parts of this.
DayDreamer077 chapter 3 . 9/20/2012
hm! this seems familiar. not sure if i read it already.
xxjasperzlovexx chapter 36 . 9/16/2012
this is the first review i have given you but i have read every chapter and its really cool u should definatly b an author anyways my charm would be a crystal heart lol k love ur work lol
JengaJenga chapter 10 . 8/24/2012
*deep breath...*

1. I know you wrote this about 5 years ago, so maybe your writing has improved... But this is middle school level writing, in sentence construction and plot development.

2. "Horny" college co-eds conveniently "home alone" for the summer acting, thinking, and talking like 12 year olds? Eeesh... NC-17? Mmm... Definitely not as far as chapter 10. And Edward's FIRST ORGASM at 21?! Oh god, I guess maybe that was supposed to be the "humor" portion of this story so far.

3. WHERE do all these fabulous reviews come from?! They HAVE to be trolls... Sorry :(
Maybe by chapter 11 this turns into the epic romance that everyone else is talking about in their reviews... But I just can't bring myself to keep reading. Next... :(
Shantelloveheart chapter 50 . 8/14/2012
did they use CONDOMS for real i think they did it about 10 times
Twi-madkat18 chapter 77 . 7/26/2012
absolutely loved this story and all the HOT! lemons lol, didn't take me long to read the whole thing, like 2days and that's with a lot of breaks in-between :D
LOOOOLs chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
LOL. anyway, honest to god, i just started and i'm loving the first few chapters. They seem... soo happy, and childlike, which is really adorable in people their age. I mean.. Edward calling her a 'beautiful present' when he found her in his bed? ahahaha. okay. i'm done

justavampire chapter 77 . 7/17/2012
I can't believe how actually depressed I became once I finished I wish the chapters were endless but so glad there is a sequel! Thank you for bestowing uopn me the brilliance that is MLOONAA!
twilight1fan chapter 77 . 7/16/2012
wow i think one day u will be a famous writer. u really impresed me. i like all of the chapters just keep on wring because u really got talent
bananafox chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
this sounds like it'll be a really fun read.
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