|Reviews for Melt|
| KpopVIP chapter 2 . 11/20/2008
oh...my...gosh...that was an unbelievably good job...wow...
| Arianni chapter 2 . 8/24/2008
One of the most in-character fics I've read so far. Kept very well to Stephanie's writing style too. Keep it up!
| LindsayLuxuria chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
wow. that was really good.
the way you write amazes me!
you make lemons become something way more than just -smut.
amazing. you only have one option. become a writer :)
| CullenAddiction chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
I absolutely loved this. I am a huge fan of the twilight series and have been anticipating this forthcoming scene. Wonderful writing and I hope SM's version is just as powerful!
| Celebrity chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Amazing work! You are a VERY talented author!
| Hinata25389 chapter 2 . 2/19/2008
Well that certainly left me feeling a little warm round the edges. What I want to know is how you do it, write like this I mean, is it from experience or from romance novels or what cause I always struggle with making it sound real. Anyway that was amazing, I really loved it.
Luv Emz x
| disneydork chapter 2 . 2/18/2008
That was so sweet!
You wrote Edward's POV incredibly well!
I hope to see more of that!
| nothingleft chapter 2 . 2/18/2008
WOW, very nice. Well done indeed. ;P
| yayme2012 chapter 2 . 2/16/2008
'Twas a little porny, but handled well overall.
| Jessi chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
Brava! Beautifully written! This was so...peacful and mellow. I rather enjoyed it. You did well, it wasn't too dirty nor too childish. My congrats to you and your amazing writing ability. Once again, you captured them perfectly.
| deathequalsoul chapter 2 . 2/11/2008
that was very sweet, not "insert some word" at all. haha.
| RabidTree chapter 2 . 2/10/2008
Definitely one of the most well written, passionate, in character, and absurdly brilliant lemons out there.
Thanks for writing this - it was fantastic.
| rosewg chapter 2 . 2/9/2008
Amaizingly well done, love was palpable and somehow there's passion between the lines and made the whole story erotic and not vulgar as others lemons. Love it!
| m r s . a u t h o r chapter 2 . 2/9/2008
i really like it in e's point of view. i read b's but e's good too.
| m r s . a u t h o r chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
so sweet. so not dirty. this is a pear. not a lemon.