Reviews for The Time Meddlers
vladtepes198627 chapter 19 . 2/27
Neville Longbottom and Harry Potter share the same exact birthday.
That's a large part of the plot. They were both born on July 31st.
DanYHKim chapter 28 . 1/27
I know that dentists need to have good 3D spatial conception in order to do some of their work. I do wonder if Hermione's father will suffer professionally for his loss. Although I suppose that the skills acquired from long practice will make up for it. Skills acquired from long practice will make up for it.
DanYHKim chapter 26 . 1/26
Woah. No Scooby Doo villain reveal could have surprised me more than Susan's bombshell!
Amber Bellum chapter 32 . 1/22
I loved the idea of the fic but not so much the execution. It was really dark in some parts and as you already know, the ending was rushed. I do agree with other reviews that now that you know your weakness, you should work on it.
malexandria chapter 31 . 1/13
Just like the books, especially here. The last minute Snape saves Harry was completely out of left field when you made him so repentantly evil in this story, we're supposed to believe that his "love" for Lilly made him save Harry here? He had zero issues with killing all those people in Diagon, or raping and killing under Voldemort nor Killing Dumbledore, but in one brief moment he still saved Harry. Otherwise fantastic story.
malexandria chapter 32 . 1/13
Great story, very unique and loved how you introduced a new big bad that was worse than Voldemort. However it felt like you just randomly dropped characters like what happened to the Weasleys, Ron in particular? What side was he on. What happened to Sirius or Remus? Etc. But otherwise, really liked how original it was.
Jetstream chapter 32 . 12/27/2022
"I think the problem is that I'm not very good at writing endings. I apologize for that, but at least I finished the story."

Okay, mate, if you get that criticism a lot, and if you agree... Why don't you try to improve how you write endings?

If I were to guess, I'd bet that you find the middle parts of the story more interesting, "the fun part," and when you get near the end you're bored with it and just want it to end. Is that about right?

Even if that's not the reason, all parts of writing are skills that can be improved. Make an effort. Go back and re-read some of your favorite books and pay attention to how they end. Practice.

You felt the need to acknowledge it, so you've identified a problem. Why not fix it?
Guest chapter 32 . 11/30/2022
Great story, thanks for sharing!
ElendorAnardil chapter 32 . 9/20/2022
Very good story, I really enjoyed it. Although it's true that the ending felt a little bit rushed, but being aware of a flaw is a good way to start correcting it. Thanks a lot for your work!
Guest chapter 32 . 8/31/2022
Beautifully well done
Libby Beresford chapter 32 . 8/31/2022
very good !
Libby Beresford chapter 2 . 8/30/2022
why would harry not get clothes that fit u walk around like a derro !
Guest chapter 25 . 8/14/2022
HelloKitty1318 chapter 32 . 8/2/2022
Really enjoyed this story, just sad Remus and Sirius didn’t get reunited
Guest chapter 10 . 5/13/2022
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