Neville Longbottom and Harry Potter share the same exact birthday.
That's a large part of the plot. They were both born on July 31st.

I know that dentists need to have good 3D spatial conception in order to do some of their work. I do wonder if Hermione's father will suffer professionally for his loss. Although I suppose that the skills acquired from long practice will make up for it. Skills acquired from long practice will make up for it.

Woah. No Scooby Doo villain reveal could have surprised me more than Susan's bombshell!

I loved the idea of the fic but not so much the execution. It was really dark in some parts and as you already know, the ending was rushed. I do agree with other reviews that now that you know your weakness, you should work on it.

Just like the books, especially here. The last minute Snape saves Harry was completely out of left field when you made him so repentantly evil in this story, we're supposed to believe that his "love" for Lilly made him save Harry here? He had zero issues with killing all those people in Diagon, or raping and killing under Voldemort nor Killing Dumbledore, but in one brief moment he still saved Harry. Otherwise fantastic story.

Great story, very unique and loved how you introduced a new big bad that was worse than Voldemort. However it felt like you just randomly dropped characters like what happened to the Weasleys, Ron in particular? What side was he on. What happened to Sirius or Remus? Etc. But otherwise, really liked how original it was.

"I think the problem is that I'm not very good at writing endings. I apologize for that, but at least I finished the story."

Okay, mate, if you get that criticism a lot, and if you agree... Why don't you try to improve how you write endings?

If I were to guess, I'd bet that you find the middle parts of the story more interesting, "the fun part," and when you get near the end you're bored with it and just want it to end. Is that about right?

Even if that's not the reason, all parts of writing are skills that can be improved. Make an effort. Go back and re-read some of your favorite books and pay attention to how they end. Practice.

You felt the need to acknowledge it, so you've identified a problem. Why not fix it?

Great story, thanks for sharing!

Very good story, I really enjoyed it. Although it's true that the ending felt a little bit rushed, but being aware of a flaw is a good way to start correcting it. Thanks a lot for your work!

Beautifully well done

very good !

why would harry not get clothes that fit u walk around like a derro !

Why!?

Really enjoyed this story, just sad Remus and Sirius didn’t get reunited

Di