Reviews for Functional
latuacantante-x chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
I loved it. The paragraphs fit in really well and it's very Scullyish. Something I find hard to put into words.

It's really good. :)

PearlQ19 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Well done! Very true to Scully's character, loved it! Good job :)
so kiss me goodbye chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Lovely. I had to admit your choice of title (hardly suggestive of deep or intense romance) almost immediately predisposed me to disliking this story. Just goes to show, hey? Instead of the dispassionately bland fare you could have been serving, readers get an economic but intense glimpse into a very private grief.

As well as being nicely presented, each sentence and paragraph for the most part, sounds rhythmically balanced, creating a pleasing effect for the ear. You have made the right sentences long and the right sentences short.