Reviews for In the minds eye
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13
The first rated m fanfic
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
that was good keep it up
Shadowhunter Joanne chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
That...was...a...little...too...graphic.

But, in other words, a very well done job/erm...story!

It was great!

And yes, they are (thankfully) NOT brother and sister, as Clare shows in City of Glass...

Can't WAIT till City of Fallen Angels comes out this year!
borderlinelime chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
omg...Jace and clare...tiny bit too graphic for the book, but as your fanfic, totally good
fairydustillusion chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
this. is. AWESOME.! do a sequel or something! or update!
roselynne32 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
amazing! Beautifully written. Please, please, please write more!
CV chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Woo, too graphic for me!
Cassy chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I actually just started reading this not too long ago and finished the book in two days [I'm a pretty slow reader too]. I thought it was sweet to have a little romance between Clary and Jace. But when I found out they were brother and sister, I felt kinda sick. I felt kinda sorry for Clary too.

This was GREAT and I loved it. x)
Kittysayhi chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Nice. I always Clary and Jace belonged together and am convinced they are not related. I'm sure in City of Glass it will reveal that they're not brother and sister but if they are they should hook up anyway as sick as that sounds. Anyway good story, loved it.
Angie chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Fantastic! you must write more.
TheaterofTragedy chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I loved this! I literally almost cried when I found out they were brother and sister!They so belong together! Anyways great story 10/10!
CasacuaranGirl1991 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
OMG!
Cdabryhea chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
really really good. :)
bamaslamma29 chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
You know, I'm pretty darn sure the author left us a clue in the last book, "City of Ashes",... (*SPOILER ALERT BELOW*)

...that Jace and Clary are going to turn out NOT to be brother and sister. At one point toward the end of the book, when Clary and Valentine are exchanging words, Valentine says something about Clary's "brother" and Clary mentions Jace. Then Valentine begins to say "That's not who I..." when his statement is cut off.

It's a small clue, meant to help us suspect that something is amiss with the whole "Jace and Clary are bro and sis" thing. I think they're going to find out they are not bro and sis.

Besides this clue, the author is still pushing the Jace/Clary relationship in her books, by continuing their romantic feelings for one another despite what they've "learned", and by the kissing scene that the faeries made happen. That wasn't in there for nothing.

Mark my words... they are NOT bro and sis!

Anyway, just wanted to say I truly enjoyed this, and hope to see more Jace/Clary fanfic from you in the future. You're a great author!

Cheers, Bama
Panda Slippers chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
ugh! poor clary. Things better be fixed next book.
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