|Reviews for Holding Back|
| Marionette of Ancient Relics chapter 1 . 2/16/2019
Ah yes, Unresolved Sexual Tension
| EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I really enjoyed how the kissing turned slow and sensual after being hot, fast and needy. You did the transition really well. :3
| DeanneGray chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I loved it. Could practically feel Cloud's finger in my mouth haha. Great writing style, just the right balance of dialogue and description. Thanks for writing! xxx
| SUFFERINGLOSTSOUL chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
"Maybe...maybe it's just...you". Yup, that pretty much sums up everything between them.
| xoxopenguinsxoxo chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I can only imagine how Cloud using his own spit to help Leon out would have been so much less exciting! Would be nice if real life had simple equations like this, though! Sparing injury make out session. xD
I can't stop reading your fanfics. :X I'm trying not to bombard you with reviews, I really am! xD
| slewy chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
O, a longer one! So, this was fantastic. I keep feeling that way. I wonder what it is. :P I just adore the way you write their interactions. Simply perfect.
"What, you want me to use /my/ spit?" XD
| cootchiecoo chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Hawt! Extra big love for this moment...
*fans self* I think I have a thing for fingers in mouths 0_o Oh well! Love it! LeonxCloud OTP for ever!
x Muffin x
| xKuriko chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Loved it, wish I could write as good as that, lol.
| oh hey asdfklj chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Hm, you and Leon/Cloud is just always gorgeous. This got me right from the beginning with: "You don't have to be brave around me, Cloud..." Gahh, so lovely. I did appreciate the slight extension in length. xD Stunning - you are so fave'd.
| Shadow Cat17 chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
This was so them! I loved it!
| Shattered Mirror01 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Aw, cute, but still with a serious edge. You capture the essence of their relationship so well. *pouts*
Pwp? Porn without plot? Huzzah! Please post? *puppy dog eyes*
| BelleDragon chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Love this moment as always... favorite line is Leon's "I won't hold back anymore... if you don't," and also get a kick out of this thought (again Leon)- "hopeful that the heat from a good, strong shot or three (hehe) would help clear his suddenly clouded head" - ending with the pun XD xo Belle
| leonhart-less chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Hooray for a longer piece! Goodness, your works are always so emotive and damn-near perfect... I applaud you for getting out of your comfort-zone and writing a little more than normal. It turned out fantastic... Loved Leon's "I won't hold back anymore" line. Good work!
| hersummerdreams chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Have I -told you- how much I love your characterisation! SERIOUSLY. GUH. I LOVE YOU. XD HAVE MY CHILDREN.
lmao but honestly THANK YOU for for doing a longer one. I was like SKLDFJLDSKFJSDKFJSDKLFJDS STELLAR POSTED and then yeah guh 8D um um um love. and. your verbs. wtf I know but verbs are fun- why am I talking about verbs. ._.
... bai X3
| Lady Gunblade chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
That was sweet and funny at the same time