Reviews for The Wise One: Book One: Becoming
coffee walnut chapter 2 . 2/10/2008
WOW! that turned out to be pretty interesting! i liked the description from padfoot's point of view... will he be in his animagus form for some time?

anyways, quite an interesting start... this on goes straight to my favs... hope you update soon...
Solunar chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Nice poem :)

The bright eyes referring to Harry? and the dark one to Sirius? I wonder whose hands those are.

Now, WHERES THE STORY? I CANT WAIT! :P
Noontide chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Awesome start-off! I can't wait for the rest. x3 So, how've you been?
trueroyalblue chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Awesome poem! I can't wait to see the rest of the story!

I really hope this is different from the rest of the stories like these. (Not that I mean offense or anything) From what I picked up from the summary, it sounds really good, but I've read a few of them like this. I know I'm repeating myself, but I like what I see.

I don't like judging a story just by the first chapter, but it's an amazing and fantastic start! Like I said before, I can't wait for the rest of the story, and good luck!
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