|Reviews for Avenging|
| AYH chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I'm sorry to hear about your real life troubles and I hope that you're doing better now. It's great to see this story continued again and I'll be sure to stop on by more frequently to see the next chapter. Things are really moving along now, though I'm very worried about Tofu now as that was one aspect of Dr. Pym that I really could have gone without seeing again.
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
By the way, that wasn't a Doombot she defeated. It was the real deal. Poor Doom... at least he isn't the only one that Squirrel Girl has defeated embarrassingly. She's the most powerful character in the Marvel Universe, and I think she took down Thanos once. Off screen, of course, but it happened.
| Ganheim chapter 40 . 8/15/2013
You can contact me at:
[Alas, QuickEdit ate this one…and the next few. Pity, the guide to the characters would probably be great]
her martial arts skills would enable her to stay alive much more easily than her handicapped or homemaker sisters…No way in hell was that happening
[What an amusing means of convincing herself]
Better to lose short term gain in exchange for losing very long term
[Funny, her canon self seemed to have trouble with this strategic aspect because she made lots of short-term gain, long-term loss decisions. I think I like the change]
Nabiki envisioned Akane and Kasumi as costumed vigilantes, and found herself enjoying the best laugh she had in years
[Irony is sweet]
everyone knew the insane never won
[Funny, pop culture examples I can think of have crazy minions wiping the floor with regular ones more]
Shiro's gaze met his suddenly he more aware
[met his, and suddenly he was]
get there now!
inside five minute to
You had to be human to be enslaved
[Eerie – especially that I’d heard people speak just like this in the modern day]
around him. "He'll
[Was there intended to be a narrative segment between these sentences]
acknowledging spreading your ashes over someone was not the best way to defeat them
[Unless they’re a germophobe or have OCD]
nose bled quit profusely
who she had renamed
[whom, since it’s referring to an object instead of subject (who). Not a major thing, but when you know what the rule is you can see it in use and make sense of it, for some reason most schools I know didn’t teach that simple rule – probably because most teachers didn’t bother to remember it]
AI that had gotten itself in here
[there? Or is this referring to something from the outside that snuck briefly into the robot?]
every base had at least two
[Looks like somebody finally read at least a little of “If I was the Evil Overlord”]
Found a couple tiny technical errors, but it’s great to finally see that you’re writing again. There’s intrigue and comedy along with superpowers blowing stuff up, which is always nice to see. Good health and good luck with your future writing.
| Veedramon chapter 40 . 8/12/2013
Well, I wanna see more of Ami and Doctor Doom...
| Veedramon chapter 39 . 8/12/2013
And so Nabiki finally found out...
| Veedramon chapter 38 . 8/12/2013
Wonder if he will try to get Bucky?
| Veedramon chapter 37 . 8/12/2013
Doctor Doom is Ami's father... cool!
| Veedramon chapter 36 . 8/12/2013
So, Sasuke finally got his revenge...
| Veedramon chapter 35 . 8/12/2013
Well, this was somewhat informative...
| Veedramon chapter 34 . 8/12/2013
Bye bye Phantom Cats!
| Veedramon chapter 33 . 8/12/2013
Well, all looks good for Tigra...
| Veedramon chapter 32 . 8/12/2013
Well, Daredevil finally gets a decent villain... yay!
| Veedramon chapter 31 . 8/12/2013
I would do it if it only changed things for the better and didn't prevent me from being born.
| Veedramon chapter 30 . 8/12/2013
Okay, things will get bad...
| Veedramon chapter 29 . 8/12/2013
Well, two girls after ALL the avengers? Sure you must jest!