|Reviews for Lemuria|
| duj chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Poetry never gets many reviews, especially when it's dense with allusion. Most ffnet readers don't rise much above rhyming stories or humorous doggerel. Do you post at fictionpress or online poetry sites? You'd probably get more feedback there.
I think I get the ending of this, but I'm a bit puzzled over what illness you had in mind.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Obscure - but at least (unlike most of the so-called poetry on ffn) it's a "proper" poem.
Lemuria is also a legendary - and probably wholly imaginary - lost continent between India and Australia, although it's certainly true that sea levels rose at the end of the last Ice Age and there were, if not whole countries, at least quite large seaboard provinces of existing countries which were drowned.