Reviews for Embrace
Ava Whitlock chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
This story struck a note in my heart...

Naruto had always strove so hard to make things right and people happy...He definitely would be a deserving Hokage...but, some'n 'bout him breaking down is so tragic...He's like the sun that never ceases to shine...always full of optimism...

But, that's okay, cause, everybody has their moments...

;)

You portrayed the characters incredibly well...especially Sakura...you brought together two heart-broken people together...and that deserves a mighty appraisal...

:D
KatAang919 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Please update soon!
Melitza chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
It broke my heart when he asked "Why couldn't I be enough?" - because no one wants to believe that someone who honestly, truly tries as hard as Naruto could really fail so utterly.

Pure angst sadness! Well written though. Now I need to find some fluff/smuff/smut to fill in the hole you've left in my heart, lol.
IAmTheBattleMaiden chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
KYAA! Sugoi-ne! I loved it! How touching... *tear* _

Ja-ne! _-
xpeekaboo chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Wow, sorry, it took a while for me to get back to you xD. I don't remember how it was the first time around, but yeah, it's a lot better when I read it again xD. Hopefully, you can get off hiatus soon, because your story ideas are interesting :).
rawrchelle chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I'll get this out of the way first; the writing could be better, but everyone can improve in some way, right?

And now, let me squeal. Dear God, I love the plot to this. I've never read anything about Naruto being the Hokage, and... wow, Sasuke dead, avenging his clan, (Tsunade-baa-chan's face? I loved that xD), and Sakura just being there for him... I loved it all. I would've loved it more if Sakura didn't kiss his temple, because I prefered to see their relationship as friends, because it just somehow seemed to fit that much more. But nevertheless, I loved it anyway.
Lady Dark Angel chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I so love it! XD absolutely wonderful
kimikimi chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
ah so CUTE and fluffly and sad and heartbreakinlyg sad and cry worthy and i LOVE IT well done