Reviews for Embrace
Ava Whitlock chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
This story struck a note in my heart...

Naruto had always strove so hard to make things right and people happy...He definitely would be a deserving Hokage...but, some'n 'bout him breaking down is so tragic...He's like the sun that never ceases to shine...always full of optimism...

But, that's okay, cause, everybody has their moments...


You portrayed the characters incredibly well...especially brought together two heart-broken people together...and that deserves a mighty appraisal...

KatAang919 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Please update soon!
Melitza chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
It broke my heart when he asked "Why couldn't I be enough?" - because no one wants to believe that someone who honestly, truly tries as hard as Naruto could really fail so utterly.

Pure angst sadness! Well written though. Now I need to find some fluff/smuff/smut to fill in the hole you've left in my heart, lol.
IAmTheBattleMaiden chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
KYAA! Sugoi-ne! I loved it! How touching... *tear* _

Ja-ne! _-
xpeekaboo chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Wow, sorry, it took a while for me to get back to you xD. I don't remember how it was the first time around, but yeah, it's a lot better when I read it again xD. Hopefully, you can get off hiatus soon, because your story ideas are interesting :).
rawrchelle chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I'll get this out of the way first; the writing could be better, but everyone can improve in some way, right?

And now, let me squeal. Dear God, I love the plot to this. I've never read anything about Naruto being the Hokage, and... wow, Sasuke dead, avenging his clan, (Tsunade-baa-chan's face? I loved that xD), and Sakura just being there for him... I loved it all. I would've loved it more if Sakura didn't kiss his temple, because I prefered to see their relationship as friends, because it just somehow seemed to fit that much more. But nevertheless, I loved it anyway.
Lady Dark Angel chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I so love it! XD absolutely wonderful
kimikimi chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
ah so CUTE and fluffly and sad and heartbreakinlyg sad and cry worthy and i LOVE IT well done