|Reviews for My First and Final Fantasy: Pilot|
| Amylou11987 chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
Im reading this again for the second time and im all ready hooked !
| Lady Mariha chapter 20 . 10/26/2011
Hell YEA! I'm off to part 2 now. It's awesome, otherwise I wouldn't have read the complete story.
| MangaFreak3 chapter 20 . 7/27/2011
You know... i realized i'm rereading your story from the first story. I'm tempted to read the second story again but then it's kinda long, so i'll go ahead and read part III...
| Terikel chapter 7 . 7/25/2010
Mmh, good old times. The first fanfiction I've ever read, and it's still so ridiculous good that I can't stop smiling while reading about Rayne's antics.
I'm sorry I've not written a review in such a long time, but it was my final year and I didn't have a lot of time because of the exams, and afterwards I just wasn't in the mood for another Bleach story. Your Final Fantasy Fanfictions are still the best in my opinion. )
And since it's a lot of work to find a good piece of work amongst all those bad fics that are sadly lurking on this site, I'm gladly enjoying my favourite fiction again. I like Rayne, and I love Auron. Heck, I even love Braska and Jecht when you're writing them! xD
Uhm... well, now I stop rambling. I justed wanted to tell you how much I love your stories and how happy I am to read such good fanfictions. )
| Amekoryuu chapter 20 . 4/26/2008
I just love your stories~ The way that you write the char's are the best.
| Terikel chapter 20 . 3/10/2008
Well, I hope you will approve the fact that I only registered to write a review and add you to my favorites. And I can tell you that english is not my best language, still I could'nt stop reading your great story, using sometimes a dictionary xD
Well, I really hope too you understand everything I write
The most important thing is surely that I really, really love this story. I began it and coudn't stop until the end. You made me laugh and also cry.
Although my english isn't the best, I can tell that you're a really great writer and, thanks to you, I didn't learn a thing for my english test tommorow. (But what matters, I practised english while I was reading this)
So, tomoorow, after I'll get home, I will probably start your other story
Go on like this!
| Mata-NuiXIII chapter 20 . 2/18/2008
this is a great story i really want to read the next one. when are you going to write it im really looking forward to it.
| Phsi-Masamune chapter 20 . 2/14/2008
That was...amazing! You truely have a talent for writing! There were some areas that could have been improved a bit, but that gets better over time the more you write. Over all, I'd say good work!
So... Whens the sequel?
| Icebox Plums chapter 20 . 2/10/2008
Excellent ending. And even if she's a bit lacking now, you've got more to write to work that out. Character development, after all, is the backbone of a story. So keep writing / posting... by the way, how long did this take you? If you can keep a good pace, expect many more reviews from moi.
| Not Jack Frost chapter 20 . 2/10/2008
This is... Great. Stunning. Unexpected. The plot twist of the year nomination.
And I just love your writing style.
Also, This fic demands a sequel.
| LeonFan2k3 chapter 5 . 2/10/2008
Not bad. I like the idea. Introducing the OC for a couple chapters before actually getting into the game parts. Keep going.
| Icebox Plums chapter 5 . 2/10/2008
I like it - well-written and with a fresh idea of the "sucked-in" story. The one thing I really don't like is the protagonist's name... Rayne. It's a bit cliche for me, honestly. I think if you would give her a more natural name, less readers would think she was a (dreaded) Mary-Sue.
I was awfully disappointed when this was a note and not another chapter. (hint-hint?)
| Triforce Guardian chapter 5 . 2/9/2008
It sounds pretty interesting, judging from what I've read. This could be a really awesome story, so I say go for it.
| Not Jack Frost chapter 5 . 2/9/2008
Great start. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!