|Reviews for A Rival Story|
| 1sunfun chapter 11 . 2/9
| AnimangaLoverFE chapter 11 . 2/2
please continue this story...i am really interested in knowing what happens next
| mamita chapter 11 . 1/5
Hello, I liked your fic, hopefully upload more chapters, I love Sai and Hikaru are so cool and handsome, I love this couple, for me is one of the best, and Hikaru that fool is sometimes poor Sai, as if it never existed and Hikaru realizes too late how much you want to Sai, because when that this has already gone, but there are not many fics of them, and among them could do more lovebirds, hehe, i like the couple Waya and Hikaru, these two stick together, I also like the fascination and others having Hikaru Ogata, although not always with Hikaru, I do not like the couple Akira and Hikaru, though not dislike me, do not hit much despite However, for me the only rival of Hikaru is Sai, Touya and although others are not so bad, and it shows, I do not like Akari, is not that special, and gets into everything, so still thanks and kisses.
| RustedEagleWings chapter 11 . 11/20/2013
Exciting story! I hope to see more soon!
| emily chapter 6 . 11/15/2013
Lol read one if your comment replies abt how someone assumed Akira was gay. I thought the exact same thing xD and this chapter also somewhat implies that Akira was kind of jealous (is it just me?) abt tsuitsui and kaga being so friendly towards Hikaru.
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/15/2013
This is a really good! I hope you haven't abandoned this story.
| F. Flotsam chapter 10 . 6/4/2013
Hi! I know its been a while since you updated this, but I just wanted you to know, I really love this fic. Your writing is great. You really capture Hikaru and Toya's personalities, not to mention Mitani, the Meijin, and Hikaru's parents as well. The dilogueis wonderful, and I really love how you portray Hikaru and Mitani' quiet, snarky friendship, and Toya's awkwardness. Thanks for writing, and best wishes in whatever you do!
| BeyondMyReach chapter 5 . 2/27/2013
Brilliant story so far, especially on the portrayal of the parents. More often than not, writers just skip over them and it's nice to see it doesn't happen for once. I like this portrayal of Shindou's father, especially. He is just so likable, and you can see where Shindo got his unpredictable nature from.
| KittyCat chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
Justice is served.
| Fireotaku18 chapter 11 . 12/30/2012
this is a really good story!
| Perfetta chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Ohmigosh. I love this story so much...it makes me cry to see the 2008 part of the!Last Update Date.
I really am crying.
| Annabeth chapter 11 . 11/20/2012
Why'd ya stop? I really like this version of Hikaru No Go. It's well thought out and entertaining in a different kind of way. I love Hikaru and Sai's almost brotherly relationship, it really makes this story all that much better for me.
| Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko chapter 11 . 11/16/2012
Umm, did you discontinue this? I really like it & wish there was more.
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/4/2012
this is a good chapter. Akira's interaction with his mother is well-thought and realistic.
| Shinigami Clara chapter 11 . 9/4/2012
Have you abandoned this story?
*pokes at the story and watches in fascination as it flops around* it looks like it's still alive :3
XP that was mean of me... anyways! love the story, i'm not really sure how strong Hikaru is though... is he weaker than Akira or almost even? and in comparison to the other insei, how much stronger/weaker is he?
Is Kaiou and Akira going to be in the tournament? Would Akira be able to pull Hikaru into the Go world with him without losing Hikaru's friendship? I hope you will eventually get back to this story :D i really enjoy it