Reviews for Chip fanfic
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Glad Tony is Ok. And Gibbs got Chip.
JaspersLilRed chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
I agree with the other reviewers. It's a great plot, but you should add

-More descriptive

-Diolouge

-Point of view (I think this would be good as either a Gibbs POV or Tony)

-Make it longer. If longer, this could EaSilY have 50 reviews, especially if multichapter.

Keep up the good work.
Cold Ember chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Um... a little short, there. I could easily see this plot being several thousand words worth of story, but this really just seemed like short summary, readers digest version. The idea is great, but it really needs to be longer. Much, much longer.
mic19671967 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I enjoyed your story and especially the interaction between Tony and Gibbs, but I would have liked to see it a little longer.

Mic (the wife)
iheartgeekz chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
This actually looked more interesting than it was. It was too short, there wasn't much plot, and no dialog. If you could re-do it and make it into a longer story, it would make more sense, and could be a hit.
KatD1359 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Could have been longer.
FrostyFingers chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
i loved the idea. but its too short. id loved to read more and a few conversations two. think you can write something like that again? youre ideas are great. keep it up. ILU Greg
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Dear silver:

Okay, so that's the plot summary; now when may we expect the story?

Sincerely,

Qoheleth