|Reviews for In The Words of Hermione Jean Weasley|
| ThunderSphinx chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
Hermione would *never* change her last name. And seriously? Why would you want her to have the name "Weasley?" "Granger" is a so much better name.
| Goutt2mer chapter 7 . 12/26/2011
I found your story a loooong time ago, when I finish to read "The Words of Ginevra Molly Potter" and it makes me time for reading this, sorry for the late but I'm really late in my readings actually by the lack of time.
But I finally read and I liked it very much ! It's really part of the other story and there are so many things more talked and explained than in the books - normal, JK Rowling can't write a story with everyone having his point of vue. It would be impossible to understand ! -
I really enjoyed the chapter of Hermione in France and the next ones ; it makes Hermione see herself more like a young teenage girl than the friend of "The Boy Who Lived" and Weasley number 6 - as they called Harry and Ron - it's nice to see Hermione have a life behind her best friends. ;)
So I hope that you'll continue that story, but I suppose that will not in your plans, as you didn't post a chapter since two years now...
So good continuation !
| Wizard-in-training chapter 7 . 7/3/2011
Are you quitting this story? UPDATE THIS GREAT FIC NOW! Kudos;)
| Romance and Musicals chapter 7 . 6/24/2009
This story is great! I love the Hermione-Dean-Seamus friendship! It's so cute!
| aep2398 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
I love this story! You're a very good writer for your age. I would love to see Ron's reaction to her having a crush on Harry! LOL.
But I would like to request that I be your beta. I don't mean to be demanding, it's just I can see a lot of places where your grammar could be improved.
No offense. Just a question.
And another perk of being a beta is the fact that I get to view the chapters earlier than anyone else. :)
I know- I'm evil.
So, anyway, consider it (please).
| ObsessedRHShipper chapter 6 . 5/12/2009
I do find the new friend with Dean and Seamus unusual and wonder how it will affect the rest of the known story. For example, will it take away from the loneliness she feels when she gets into a fight with Ron in 3rd year.
| Grownupron chapter 7 . 5/12/2009
Did you read the books?
| Dapplegrim chapter 6 . 3/26/2009
I loved it! Great idea to grow on Seames (I know my spelling sucks) and Dean(Remeber that Dean draws). I am estatic that you're rewriting the first 2 chapters even if it takes to November because there is so much more you can add. I love reading these. All of you chapters for Ginny were up before I started reading them so I was spoiled. If you need any help or ideas email me. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Remeber for Ron to owl her about the telephone incident and her reaction about Harry blowing his aunt up. And Crookshanks almost eating scabbers. What do you think she sees when the dementor comes in? Maybe the troll incident or her thinking she has no friends, or Harry going through the magic fire in the first book. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.-dapplegrim
Or maybe Hermione has a deep dark secret, such as a cancer episode? Just a few ideas. Sorry if its took much all at once.
| Dapplegrim chapter 5 . 3/26/2009
From last chapter great french. I take spanish and might take french juninor year. It's a good chapter even if it is short. I only think its short because I read the past 5 chapters in less time then it takes me to read one ginny chapter.-dapplegrim
| Dapplegrim chapter 4 . 3/26/2009
Awesome! I love how you are adding a guy to give her confidense in herself.-dapplegrim
| Dapplegrim chapter 3 . 3/26/2009
Don't worry about how quick your geting the new chapters jut make sure you're pleased with them and they aren't too rushed. Remenber that Hermione can be if not the same very close in her complexitity as Ginny. You could have made her subconsishly aware of what was going on around her. I still really like it. -dapplegrim
| Dapplegrim chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
It was short, but good. You could have added about Ron saying that she was a nightmare during Charms. Don't worry I suck at spelling too so don't worry about it. -dapplegrim ;P
| Dapplegrim chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I loved your Ginny fanfict and are very excited to reading this one.
| Anderfail chapter 6 . 1/12/2009
I understand what you're trying to do here, but you've already veered off Hermione's personality. Hermione wasn't really liked all that much by the rest of her peers save for Harry, Ron, Ginny, Luna and Neville. Everyone else just basically tolerated her presence. That's not to say it's a bad thing, it's just that she could get quite bossy and pushy.
Also if you're trying to give Hermione friendships that aren't known, that's fine, but if you're saying she kept those friendships secret for over 20 years from her husband then that's a little much. I trust my fiance, but I'd be pretty damn pissed off if I found she had been keeping people in confidence without my knowledge because it would feel like she was going behind my back and it would be difficult to trust her afterwards. Considering Ron's temper and tendency to act without thinking, I can't see Hermione keeping friendships from him ending in anyway other than disaster.
I think it's great that you're trying to develop Hermione's character more and tell stuff from her point of view, but just keep in mind that if you want your story to fit in canon then you really can't have her doing stuff that would be out of character.
I've enjoyed your story so far and would like to continue to see more.
| Slytherin84ever chapter 6 . 11/17/2008
Ooh, I loved this chapter. And I didn't think you needed to re write the others but if you do I know I'll still like them. I am looking forward to more and hope you update soon. BTW, I loved you throwing in seamus and dean and a close friendship with hermione. And the I love the builiding of hermione and ginny's relationship. Now, off to actual thrid schhol year!