Reviews for Spartan Training
teanotes chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
kitana. for me its 1 in the morning and im in bed and i just thought, "where was that baby ryoma fic kitty wrote a while back? i need to read that again for reference" and i truly have no regrets. i don't think my review gives it justice.

i love love love bratty baby ryoma and how manipulative he is even at age. MOMMY WHY DONT YOU LOVE ME ANYMORE? what a..what a brat. a cute brat. an adorable brat ive succumbed to utterly.

you capture my favorite rinko and nanjiroh as always and i just love the element of rinko being torn between the two most difficult people in her life. i admire her strength. and then nanjiroh being all philosophical at the end aksjalsjlsjadhks

but most of all — I LOVE THE WAY U WRITE TODDLERS. LIKE everything is so adorably realistic to me? ryoma the eternal baby. i truly love this fic. thank u darling.
Aquamarin.Kit chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
That old man is soo mean... *pouts with Ryo-chan*

*mumbles* doing that to the poor boy... *hugs Ryo-chan & glares at Nanjirou* He's addicted... with tennis...

*gg* Jap, Kids always win! XDD And yes he already THAT manipulative! XDD

How brave - calling a woman ugly...ô.o especially Rinko..

But somehow I can't imagine that Rinko doesn't burn his porn-magazins for that stunt... .
kimi-lee22 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
You're right she does deserve a medal! Not only for being with Nanjiroh but also for putting up with RYOMA...whom I adore. I can't wait to see more of your family time stories.
aku no tensai chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
It certainly put a smile on MY face! XD

xDevilishAngelx chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This definitely put a smile on my face. You don't see many fanfics with Rinko in them.

"You look like a potato!" I should say that more often. Such an awesome line :D

Such a CUTE story! X)
raziella chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
not really much going on, but still enjoyable. I liked the potato comment and Ryoma's demanding persona which somehow seemed to fit him really well.
Phppsmss chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
'your ugly mother'. Lol
Frog-kun chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This fic has some epic lines.

The boy chewed his lip as he considered this. Rinko would have loved to have known how much ten minutes equated to in Ryoma-land. Finally he gave his verdict. "No way."


"Ah Rinko," Nanjiroh drawled as he sat back, "do you think this idiot boy of ours will ever leave his mark on the world?"

She gave the question some thought. "When he knows what he really wants, then, yes."


Man, that was awesome. See, my grin is broadening as I type this.
voiceintheradio chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This story is very beautiful. It's well written and emphasizes the family relationship the Echizens have. In a fandom dominated by slash (and I have nothing against slash, in fact, I pretty much love it), this kind of thing rarely gets a focus, and it's nice that we have little ficlets like this to show us what may happen behind the scenes, in both those slash stories and the show itself.

All in all, I love it!
blueyblonde chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
very cute
anonymous jane chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
thank you so much for making a fic with rinko and nanjiroh. we really really really need more of those! keep writing them!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
That was adorable! It was well written and the idea completely cute. A petulent Ryoma is adorable!
MokonaYi chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Aww my! Cutie Ryoma! *screams*

He is so cute! This is a really cute story!

Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Aw, Ryoma was so cute x3

tpfw01 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
I love your story it's funny and believable! I can totally imagine that situation. Ha! It was so funny when Ryoma said Nanjiroh looked like a potato!
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