This was wonderfully written! Thank you for taking the time to pay attention to spelling / grmmar, I think it drives all readers insane when the author doesn't do at least a half decent spellcheck. Just one pointer for fututre referance: (more of a factual error)... if Edward's venom (on his tongue) had touched Bella's split lip, it would've turned her into a vamp. AH.

Yummy love it :D

This was so good! It makes me sad you're not writing another one. It was touching, and sweet, and I especially loved the kissing scene. It sounded just like the ones in the book!

AWESOME!

Das ist echt klasse!

I'm Teresa, or leister :D I also have an account here, just wanted to leave you a review. I loved this. :)

I really, really, REALLY love this. You've captured both Edward and Bella wonderfully.

Nice story but if Edward really did do that his venom would get into her bloodstream and she would be changed right then.

i adore this story! so in character and beautiful! ur an amazing writer!

in Chirst,

~FMA4EVER~

I thought that was really excellent writing and look forward to reading more of your fanfics.

ohmygosh. i'm sure this was your intention, but from the summary, i really thought that Edward was going to kill her. wow. ahh. i wish i had an edward. this was really, really good. wow!