Reviews for Witnessing Eden
Beckettsbabe09 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I loved this one too! It's offical, you are a wonderful writer. It was a beautiful story. Very well written and wonderful.
ElvendorkLuVer chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
omg uR lyk my new favorite author of James and Lily! THANKS THANKS THNKAS!
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Oh, that was great! It was so sweet, really, and I loved the way you described how that rain sort of cleanses everything. I've never thought of it that way, and I loved it. I loved it, great job! Hope you write more.

Angelica :]
Hannahble chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
loved it...
tweedledeela chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
this is beautifully written. i love the idea behind it, and it's such a wonderful way for them to finally get together. you did a great job with this!
anonymous jane chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
that was pretty good. very well written, though not much action.
TimePasses chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Wow! That was very, very good! Nice job.
Blackrose Kitsune chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
It's so nice to see such a sweet piece of James/Lily fluff.

The beginning, with such a melancholy storm, is basically a study in contrast of the end - the painting of Eden. Nice bit of parallelism on that, well done.

Only problem is that maybe Lily's acceptance of James' elloquent words was a bit abrupt. But then, I suppose it had to be, given the length of this viginette. So, not too bad, over all.

Keep writing.

Blackrose