Reviews for Limbo
LilithL2 chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
hard... and amazing at the same time...
congratulations ;)
bugintheforest chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
this was super sweet in its sad little way... :)
Fishy Rainboots chapter 2 . 8/17/2008
Great job. Very well written.
FrogDancer42 chapter 2 . 5/20/2008
Cool parallel. I liked the accuracy, even if it was heart-breaking. You portrayed Daniel so well!


nicimac chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
I love the emotions in this - you write them really well. You should develop this into what happens after and how they eventually (as they surely must do!) get together
mummi troll chapter 2 . 2/20/2008

You really nailed all three characters and the hopeful situation our favourite couple finds itself in. I'm all about the angst, so this story was perfect - no happy ending, but the hope of one far off in the future.

And there was alot of ship in this one, which also makes me happy :D

All in all, this saved my day - thanks for sharing!
Devilish Me chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
Great story so far! Liking it a lot!
Entropic Cascade chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
I just loved that second part...the silent conversation between Daniel and Jack...just loved sad...but good
Featherhawk chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
Wow, this story was really sad and well written! Great job, and I hope to read more of your stuff!
getcarter chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
Oh, that was just so sad... I loved it! Will there be more?
iwrite4fun chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
You have peaked my interest! Can't wait to read the next chapter!