Reviews for Amend
Zada Fighter chapter 14 . 12/24/2009
this is an awesome and sweet story!
Tattersail chapter 4 . 8/11/2009
Ek, I've gotten a little bit behind on the chapters here, sorry about that.

Good chapter, interesting. Finally some action:P
Lt-Spork89 chapter 14 . 8/4/2009
Aww that is the sweetest ending ever!
Lt-Spork89 chapter 13 . 7/13/2009
Oh! I loved it and can't wait to read some more!
pyromaniac2011 chapter 13 . 7/13/2009
Tattersail chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I've read the first three chapters now and though I generally enjoy it, I have a hard time with Charlie "struggling to keep up appreances". I'm not quite sure I get why he does it. I mean, people seem to have an idea of who he is already, and the men of the law outright know who he is. What's stopping them from telling Sara and her father?

Also, Sara seems way too trusting in the beginning. She's more or less alone in a place dominated by men and then along comes a dangerous stranger who takes an interest in her, an no warning bells go off? I don't know...

Maybe things will be resolved in later chapters. I'll be sure to read on to see what happens:)
Lt-Spork89 chapter 12 . 5/27/2009
Can't wait to read some more of this one :)
Drunky McDrunkerson chapter 11 . 4/30/2009
more more more!
amoxxx chapter 11 . 4/25/2009
i love it as per usual, please update soon i cant wait to see how this works out
Lt-Spork89 chapter 10 . 3/1/2009
oh such tension! can't wait to read some more soon!
Patunia chapter 9 . 2/28/2009
I was just wondering if you were going to continue this story. I was really getting into it. I hope you write some more. Thanks.
ivegotpurple chapter 9 . 11/22/2008
EK! FINALLY! I've been waiting so long, and you haven\t disappointed. That was REALLY good. Amazing even! Your portrayal of Charlie is very good. You don't make him seem like some romantic lover boy, you've got the essence of a coldblooded killer that's been rattled up by some girl. It works well. Anyways, I can't wait for the next one!
christine chapter 9 . 11/18/2008
This story really has me hooked more with every chapter. Please update soon, I want to see what Ben has in mind!
Lt-Spork89 chapter 9 . 11/16/2008
loved it and can't wait for some more :)
nannon chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
very cool story. i just watched the movie the other day and totally loved it. i can't wait for more chapters.
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