Reviews for Twilight's Requiem
Epona64 chapter 7 . 10/6/2008
Hmm, I'm thinkning that I may need to put an alert on this story-one of the few Zelda stories that has kept my hopes up for the section.

Oh, you may enjoy reading my most recent Zelda venture, DODONGO DISLIKES SMOKE. Something tells me that you'll like it

Anyway, keep up the good work!
His Living Doll chapter 7 . 10/3/2008
yay its the plot! XD

wow...the action...the suspense..the comedy...the romance...the drama...the breaking of the fourth wall! Its a smoothie of exelence with twili sprinkles! XD

When I 1st read Kitsu...yea, all I could think was Kitsune, the her being a fox doesn't surprise just makes her more moe XD

Midna rocks. Hands down. Shes like a cross betwwen Roy Mustang and Tsunade!

Rels is so cute! haha, and I love his dream of building an airship! thats awsome! *tackleglomps Rels again XD) I had too...

oh...erm...not to be a total advertising whore, but...can Matiah have a lil' cameo in the next chapter? Its ok if she can't... but yeah, she'd be good as like...a maid who cleans Lein's room or somthing...and of course another girl for Rels to hit on...0_o" gosh I'm horrible, I'm like...pimping out my own OC's...ahh well, at least i'm not like Haruhi... more chapters...I can't say "runs to read next chapter" or the like...

wat now...oh! I know! *ahem*

His Living Doll chapter 6 . 10/3/2008
wow, awsome chapter as always! I felt like I read 3, there was so much that went on!

OK, the begining, the dream, that was just amazing, I mean I finnally start to understand the plot and stuff...ohh, that sounded bad, wait lemme explain, that a good thing! You didn't reveal every detail in the first few sentences! Its like a mystery and a love story! hehe!

Lein and Rels...words cannot describe...

“High as a fly, Lein.” Rels smirked. “And I was calling you ‘dear’ just to annoy you. As I told you last time, and I’m sorry to disappoint, but I am not homosexual.”

High as a fly...I'm gonna say that from now on, see how many blank stares I get XD

The more you deniy it Rels, the more we don't believe you XD He reminds meh of Miruku from Inu Yasha, btw...

And the confetti firsdt I was like, "NO! Dun Kill him!" then I burst into laughter, beacuse again, I pictured it so well...someone should make this into a manga...

I love Telfia...she's so abusive...

and nice cliffhanger! we finnaly get to see Midnas! XD

one last thing...Have I mentioned I love Rels? *tackleglomps Rels*
His Living Doll chapter 5 . 10/3/2008
Wow...I feel sorry for Lein...*sniffle*

and...well, the thing with Cremis was a little random, but I trust you will explain it in the next chapter...

Rels struck a pose. “One fabulous and sleepless night with me!”

XD god I luff that twili...I was laughing for about 5 straight minutes, then while Telfia hit him...yeah, I could so piture it in my mind...

(in care you haven't noticed, I like to take a quote from the chapter I'm reading that made me laugh the most...that was it...)

Onward to chapter 6!
His Living Doll chapter 4 . 10/3/2008
Wo...deep man...really dark and angsty chapter...

My problem is the prissy bitch in front of me who annoys the freakin’ hell outta me!” Lein drew his sword. “And if that bitch doesn’t translate the goddamn scripture, I’ll run this goddamn sword through her goddamn head!”

don't we all, Lein...don't we all have a prissy bitch who annoys us? I don't know about the scripture part... (which I totally got, btw yay me XD)

I run to the next chapter! *trips* ow...*runs again*
Hourglass of Fantasies chapter 7 . 10/3/2008

LUCKY STAR IS A yuri anime! Wow.

Anyways, this chapter kind of seemed like porno almost. I'll admit Midna was OOC, but I think you did good with having her really pissed off with how tedious the palace life can be. Bawesome job on that! :D

Pwease update more, this is the greatest OC story EVAH!

Oh yeah,

His Living Doll chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
~Yay! I am totally obsessed now! XD thats a good thing, btw, means more reviews for you!

"Every second Lein spent with her made him feel like he was going insane" I know alot of people like that...but so far I love Cremis, she's very funny XD

oh...who was that perv at the end? It was Rels, right? Awsome! *goes to read next 4 chapters*
His Living Doll chapter 2 . 10/2/2008
aw ~ I love love stories...XD

"I hate cheerful" Lein so far rocks, he's so much like one of my friends at school...well, he doesn't have twili fur and blue hair...well, he doesn't have twili fur anyway 0_o

yay! I luff this story! *off to read next 5 chapters*
His Living Doll chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Hi! XD haha...well, i finally got around to reading one of your stories, and thank god I did!~

This sounds so great! Can't wait to read more! Its really mysterious and compeling...~
Lekki chapter 6 . 9/21/2008
I just stumbled upon this story...I seem to be doing that a lot. Anyways, just saying that it is very good and well, I kept reading...could not stop. I wanted there to be more, so much more! So keep writing! Update now! Although, I shouldn't be one to talk, seeing how often I update...hmm, that's no reason for you not to. So, please, write a few more chapters.
Epona64 chapter 6 . 7/19/2008
Well, look at this! I wander off for a little bit, I come back, and what do I find? Three more chapters!

Everything is getting oh so very deep now, it's kind of like walking through melted chocolate, if that makes sense. Though chocolate is tastier than my computer screen...

Anyways, I like where you're going with the plot, though it's still hard to say /where/ you're going. I mean, don't really know who's good, and who's evil or whatever word you would use to describe the antagonist(s).

But yeah, keep up all the good works you do!

Twilight Princess6 chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
Oh good some humor and a chapter that isn't quite so sad. that's just waht you needed at this point. Nice job. Update soon!
Twilight Princess6 chapter 5 . 7/16/2008
Did it make me sad! Of couse it did! I'd have to have no heart to be happy at the end of this. You're doing a great job with this story. I know this sounds weird but I like sad stories. I do hope there will be some happiness in this story too though. Keep it up!
darthritter86 chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
...somebody likes to use dramatic pauses...

The originality of 'Twilight's Requiem' has returns with a grand, annoyingly short chapter, but really thank you. Your still the only fanfic writer that can freak me out with single line of text (the way girl kill her 'father' or more accurately the way the father acted proud at her actions...crep). Thats saying something because I've seen a thousand LinkXSheik yaoi and...I shouldn't have said that...
Hourglass of Fantasies chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
Here's your essay-review...

Well, where to begin? Oh yeah...

Ho-ly BUCKETS!11one!

Y'know, that's a naughty word. Heh, you are right though. It DID fit the whole... Lein's reaction to child abuse. Well at least the 'dad' doesn't fire a lazer at her or something. God I'd hate to see how the 'mom' punishes her if the mom were like that.

As for Rels, he's got a bad temper problem. Hepus-Jeapus! Even for a joke he was like a freaking spazzo. OH WELL, better luck in the next ten thousand years...

Back to the kid who got abused...

Is she the embodiment of evil itself! Or the great wielder of evil!

Or is it... Naw, I can't post THAT publically.

Now, it'd be awesome if these chapters were longer. Okay, so they're long, but longER is BettER. So what I'm really trying to say is... UPDATING THE STOREE! HoF wants MORE!
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