|Reviews for Laying Claim|
| Nalahime chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Awesome and far too short! Id love to see the two of them tease Cloud like that and seeing the blond kick some serious ass in anger. By the way: I love the way you wrote this! Nice going, buddy!
| Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I wish there was a like button on here that I could press
| Yamamoto Akane chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Ohohoho Cloud is soo cute here! XD and holy Gaia the scene is hot as hell too! That should be what threesome like! Followed by DP, and Cloud wouldn't be able to walk for the next two days, I bet...LOL
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
| Sinful-Valentine chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Ah, I could so see this happening. Its funny and cute. Plus, Zack just makes everything better with his quirky attitude.
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
A really nice story.
| Cet'lux chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Both hilarious and hot and a honor to read xD
Keep 'em coming! :3
| ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
~flails~ omg i so want to be in that room while this is happening! 0o0
| ShadoweGoddess chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Have I mentioned I love this story? This was my second time reading it,a nd I'm sure I'll keep coming back to it... Just for the laughter! The best part is the very last few paragraphs... Ah... *sighs dreamily*
Hope to see more of your work!
| Insanity Breaking Point chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
great one-shot :3
| roo17 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I loved the ending! You go kill someone Cloud! And make sure to enjoy it!
| reddoggie chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
aw, i loved how at the end cloud just blows up and just kisses zack and straddles sephiroth. it was hilarious how cloud mentions a "some stupid primitvie need to stake your claim"! haha, its cute and fun reading, thanks!QQ
| jka1 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This story had both humor and hotness! Great job :)
| pamellka chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Oh God XD You just made me giggle so much! Oh well, pervs will be pervs /w/ ILU
| Saiyuki729 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Wow what a fic. I tonally loved it especially at the ending where Cloud kisses both of them.