|Reviews for Choices|
| Kaewi chapter 11 . 4/1/2008
What a twist at the end! I'm sad to see it was all a simulation, though. I love that you had Dean keep his promise to Sam in every situation they tried, not allowing him to go off with demons. I would have liked to have seen more in that part.
| friendly chapter 11 . 2/16/2008
I just got a chance to read this story.. it was really good.. nice job..
are you going to do a sequel..
| ROBINV chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
Wait a minute, are you telling me there really is no baby, and this was all the demons' simulation? Aw, I loved the idea of Dean as a daddy and a lil' Winchester in the world! (Pouts) It was a terrific story, very enjoyable, and although I'm a bit disappointed, it was a wonderful read! Love, Robin
| Brigid Tanner chapter 11 . 2/14/2008
You're evil! you can't leave this here, you know! Really good tension and pacing in the last few chapters, which is why I didn't stop to comment on them. Had to keep reading to see what was going to happen. Interesting twist to have it all have been a demon simulation. But if that's all it was, why does Sam have some vague memories?
| Brigid Tanner chapter 8 . 2/14/2008
Now you've got me worried about Sam! love the image of Dean and his son :) Of course they took him home in the Impala. This is flowing really well.
| Brigid Tanner chapter 7 . 2/14/2008
I like the changes to the baby shower. Sam's keeping secrets from Dean...that's never good! Good job.
| gidgetgal9 chapter 11 . 2/14/2008
Well, I spent the morning reading all the chapters you posted last night- well done. Freaky, ending was definitely not what I expected- great job.
| My heart beats only for you chapter 11 . 2/13/2008
THANK GOD! I'm so glad I had faith in you because once I hit chapter 6 I was getting worried. Great story, glad I stuck around
| ChaiGrl chapter 11 . 2/13/2008
Okay so I was sick most of the day and couldn't read that much or type, but now that have, I don't know what to say. I don't know whether too be angry at you for the ending or compliment you at the HUGE twist. I mean you had me in tears one moment, seriously and the next my jaw was literally hanging open and I could not wipe the look of shock off my face if I wanted to. I had to just sit there and think about what has just happened for about 2 min. Seriously, it was overall brilliant! Never saw it coming. And a part of me really really wanted to see what would have happened if everything had panned out the way it seemed that it was. This last chapter encompasses what it means to be a fantastic writer. You keep your characters so true and grounded to the real world that I care so much more about them as people and not these weird tv guys. LOL. But you are able to put the reader in a certain mindset; having them hang off the edge of that cliff and then suddenly jerk them away and immediately have them...in a different time zone. Or something. LOL. It was a fun read.
On a side note though..
All of these run-ons and the improper grammar usage is leftover from my fever. I hope you can understand something that I have written. Trust me, when I am at 100% I will be re-reading this. Thanks for yet another wonderful story. It is always exciting to see what you come up with next. Until your next post, take care and Happy Writing!
| Brigid Tanner chapter 6 . 2/13/2008
Yeah! always good to see Bobby ;) The demons are intriguing. Can't wait to see what you've got coming next.
| Brigid Tanner chapter 4 . 2/13/2008
Evil demons, stirring up shi*t! Good action with the vampires.
| ROBINV chapter 6 . 2/13/2008
Sam going off with other hunters, being separated from Dean, sounds like a very BAD idea, playing into the hands of their enemies. This story is very exciting, and I love how quickly you're posting it! Love, Robin
| My heart beats only for you chapter 5 . 2/13/2008
This is pretty good so far :D Just out of curiosity, if you could picture any actress to play Kristine who do you envision? I feel like I've already asked this but I can't remember
| ROBINV chapter 3 . 2/13/2008
Spectacular chapter! I so love your attention to detail, and you have the boys down perfectly, which is very important to me in a Winchester story. Love, too, that we're getting into the heads (and sex lives) of the demons. Excellent read! Love, Robin
| gidgetgal9 chapter 5 . 2/13/2008
Poor Sam, it's hard being odd man out.