|Reviews for Dominion Returns|
| Luiz4200 chapter 9 . 3/1/2008
Great fic. Will Elyon be dethroned? I can't help but feel disappointed it didn't show Jake and Rose's children's reactions about the truth behind the birthmark.
| Lavenderpaw chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
This is pretty where you put your comma splices.
"Sir;they would have been dead sooner."
Change it to...
"Sir,they would have been dead sooner."