Reviews for Four Months Before the Golden Rooster
wenduo chapter 23 . 1/29
What should I say it has been a exciting, confusing, brain working, original plotted and good story this far. I can't say I have read many fanfictions like this. Not sure when you did write it but a chapter with the three of them meeting the Li clan and the mother of Clow could be interesting.
To be honest the only thing I am not quite sure of is that you have placed all the cards under the right guardian. But I am not going to pick on it that must. For all i know the list on Wiki is not even correct either.
Anyway I do really hope you will contine this story a time in the future. I also hope my reviews has not been to annoying.
wenduo chapter 22 . 1/29
Just what is Yue thinking of to save Cerberus? Haha that was one of the best telling Clow to shut up. XD Ohoh when is he going to understand how to fly?
wenduo chapter 19 . 1/29
Woah these dreams are getting scarier and scarier. But why does the Doctor also dream? I have to say I rather enjoy your monster long chapters. :D
wenduo chapter 17 . 1/29
Haha poor old Clow, now he got to live with an more mature teenager with much hormones if I should say it. XD But the flowers did sound pretty.
wenduo chapter 16 . 1/29
Aww poor thing, so much for not getting in to the sky. XD
wenduo chapter 15 . 1/29
This chapter explian the strange dreams so far, but my brain is not smart enought to understand the red wings part xD
wenduo chapter 14 . 1/29
Interesting wonder how is they going to find the key to make Yue flight on his wings? So here I guess a darker side of Clow shows up.
wenduo chapter 13 . 1/29
In so many times this chapter was very angsty, and also quite emotional. I just wonder how is Yue suppose to grow older if he don't eat?
wenduo chapter 11 . 1/29
Hmm just where did that blizzard came from? It did sounds like a very rare one, but in the end it helped getting two brothers closer that is for sure.
wenduo chapter 8 . 1/28
Ouch hehe great chapter, wonder how Clow did survive livling with these two siblings for so many years. Oww poor Yue talk about the way you learn birds to fly. Just kick them of a hill. XD
wenduo chapter 7 . 1/28
So logic and smart, sure how could I forgot that the Moon doesn 't make it own light. XD that poor Doctor must have seen the most crazy thing in his life.
wenduo chapter 6 . 1/28
Well at least I think it was logic that an young boy must had been the last thing Clow coukd think a lunar crearure would look like indeed.
wenduo chapter 5 . 1/28
Don't know what to say, but I do really love the insane and curious feeling I get from your version of Clow Reed. You may think something else, but I think it takes some curiousity and a bit crazyness to challenge the power of nature in such a way. Like the story so far
wenduo chapter 3 . 1/28
Aww young Kero sounds adoreable. Hahaha can't help but laugh from how you made Clow tired of the Li family and their old traditions. Just image if they seems quite titesome in Sakura's age. Just how bad must they have been when Clow lived and was young. XD
wenduo chapter 1 . 1/28
Interesting start, Clow sounds a bit like he is tired of traveling already. xD
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