|Reviews for Fire and Ice|
| Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
cant wait for more this is really good and i want to know what will happen next
| autumnannette19 chapter 5 . 6/19/2009
Whats next, whats next?
| DarksMasterRen chapter 5 . 7/15/2008
Great story i do hope you continue it! but theres stuff wrong !
First of its sharingan! i'm not tryin to flame and you can keep it shat..gan or whatever you had it as if you want to but can you please space your paragraphs,its hard to read it when its all bunched together
but anyways good story! hope you continue it!
Renny signing out!
| Dandy chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Good Story i love this chapter!
| apocalyps24 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
you know you started good but then put me of when you gave the girl a giant bust... quite frankly i find it ruins a story if you make design a character that isn't proportioned properly...i mean even in you wildest dreams how is a 12 year old gona have tits that big.
most girls that are only just starting to grow breasts. so that just ruined your story for me
| Darth Dragmorr chapter 5 . 2/21/2008
a good chapter i like the stroy so far. I do have a suggestion you might edit the stroy; like add more details and more body to the story because in someparts it's a little hard to follow.