|Reviews for Perils & Sacrifice|
| timkhj chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
odd and freaky. bad evil people. good writing! I really like it so far (even if my review is rather disjointed).
| bbissocute chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
Oh...This is getting so good! I cannot wait until the next chapter! I'm so glad Beast Boy's alright. Had me frightened there...Keep up the great work!
| Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 4 . 3/15/2008
Wow, this is some story writing you're doing here. I hope you update soon.
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 4 . 3/15/2008
So this was merely a demonstration. The worst is yet to come.
| Mariah chapter 2 . 2/27/2008
Good story, though I do have one comment...
Throughout the story, you change verb tenses a lot. For one sentence you'll be in present tense, and the next sentance will be in past tense. You keep switching between these two tenses. I would suggest you keep in only past tense, which is what most of yuor story is.
Other than that, great plot, story, and writing, and how you portray the characters.
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
And so it is that the threat is far greater than foreseen. The motive being the most deadly of all...pride.
| Marlicat chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
| Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
This is really getting good. I have to see where this is going.
| bbissocute chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
Wow! This plot is awesome! I am on the edge of my seat and I cannot wait until the next chapter! Excellent job. :D
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
And what a bone it is. :D
One of the fragments may get caught in her throat if she is not careful though. :D
| timkhj chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
Glad I read this past the prologue. While the opening seemed rather disjointed and sudden, this flowed well. I'm curious to see where this goes. Good job, keep it up.
| Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
That was very good. More soon please!
| bbissocute chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
Lol, Friendship Code of conduct. Very cute.
Excellent job with the Beast Boy/Raven Conversation. Absolutly lovely.
| Moving Mountains chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I loved that first chapter. This story looks like it's gonna be really interesting, and the character of the villain. Great work, update soon D
| bbissocute chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
So sorry for reviewing this morning instead of last night. My mom kicked me off for the remainder of the night.
Exquisite job. Very lovely. Albeit a few grammatical errors and run on paragraphs it was very nice to read. I certainly can not wait until the next chapter. :D