|Reviews for Waiting to Wake|
| kitty12493 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
#heart felt like stopped
#eyes began teary
WHAT THE HELL-!
WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL US?!
THAT ZORO IS DEAD!?
#furious in tears
| Think Chocolate Thoughts chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
That hurts and the last line killed me :'( it was awesome though so great job!
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Oh my goodness, I started crying as soon as the sword feel out with a crack. Kunia's sword broke as Zoro dies is so sad ;-;
| Sibilant Whisper chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Love the change in perspective with this. New take on the aftermath of Thriller Bark. Killer last line.
| Natylol chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
| NothingIWontGive chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
OMG NOT ZORO! Dx
| bestlemongreen chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Oh my god!
Everyone's routines, reactions and feelings are so real.
You know, your way of writing this story is even more touching than the very same scene in the original story itself. In the manga, everybody wondered why Zoro had slept for so long but they were not so worried except the little doctor who was always worried about the crewmate's health on daily basis.
While in your story they seemed to care more about the swordman. And yeah, Luffy wasn't worry 'cause he knew Zoro was strong...and yet he always went to visit him. The last part where Luffy realized that his first mate has stopped breathing...I don't know how to express my feeling into words. I had to remind myself "Hey, in the manga, he didn't die"
You got quite a talent in writing. Thanks for sharing such an impressive story!
| yuMeNami chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
You...what...did you just...OMG. You did!
| he-adder chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Oh gosh you just killed one of my favourite characters off.
But really well-written!
| outkaster77 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Last line knocked the breath out of me.
Good job. :)
| YazzyFic chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
"And realises that the only sound in the room is the sound of his own breathing."
Oh gawd. That was so well written, and incredibly sad. That last line was really... strong. Oh, Luffy... ZORO!
| Neko-chan desu desu chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
| hwc chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Ouch. This fic hurts. Good job of portraying Luffy in such a situation!
| darkeyes chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That is so GOOD! It's very emotional and you captured EVERYTHING perfectly. In the end it got me thinking the whole time of what the manga will be like...
Overall well done! I felt a sharp stab in my heart at the end