|Reviews for Straw Into Gold|
| Midnights-AM-Child chapter 4 . 2/11/2014
This was pretty funny. I liked the alternate ending to this classic.
| Spiralcloud chapter 4 . 1/3/2014
Aang: The Last Airbender
Zuzu: Zuko, the Fire Prince, from The Last Airbender
| hpngtdi chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
I know this story was published four yeas ago or so, but I still feel the need to say this:
There's a diffrence between writing something inspired by a book, or a Pastiche, and plagarising it. Were you to write this as a pastiche or a story that followed the same formula as Vivian Vande Velde's story, it would be acceptable, but you copied the severe majority of the passages word-for-word from her book, only chaning the names, which is plagarism. This isn't your work- it's her's, and you have no right to claim it.
I'm not trying to flame this story, but Plagarism is against the sites rules and really just dot okay in general- you're taking credit for another's words.
| Diana Wolfe chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
2. Those names are from Avatar: The Last Airbender. Aang is the main character, the Avatar, the one destined to defeat the. Zuzu is Zuko's nickname, given to him by his sister. Zuko is the exiled Fire Nation Prince. And before he joined the gAang he kept trying to capture Aang
| 21hugs chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
It was a great story, but the end wasn't as detailed as I would have hoped.
| 21hugs chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
*cough* and it's in Harry Potter *cough*
| Lucyole chapter 4 . 6/13/2011
yay the end is the best (aang and Zuzu came from aang the last airbender aang is the avatar and zuzu/zuko is the guy who wants to find him and bring him down first and then he became his firebender teacher) the name for the daughter is very nice your story was really good i like it
| xxxMusarockz chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
haha that was a funny story! Riven was an elf! Im cracking up thinking about that! Personally i think Riven should have magically turned into a man and then he should have lived with flora and her kid!
and abigail is a very beautiful name! Very sweet!
| CalyWraith chapter 4 . 2/22/2010
I don't know what #1 is, but I know #2: Aang and Zuzu are from Avatar the last Airbender, Aang is the 12 year old last Airbender, and the Avatar. Zuzu, as cruelly called by his younger sister Azula, or Zuko as his proper name is, is the banished prince of the Fire Nation or Fire Lord, depending which season you want to use, as well as an adiquate fire bender. lol I'm an Avatard :P
Plus I love your fic :P
| Mammon Grey chapter 4 . 10/12/2009
Okay, Aang and Zuzu are from Avatar: the Last Airbender. Aang is the avatar and Zuzu is the nickname Prince Zuko's sister, Azula, has for him. (He's the exiled, then un-exiled, then exiled again, then Fire Lord of the Fire Nation.)
15 points and a bagel with cream cheese, please!
Great story! Aw...Abagail is such a pretty name. Does it really mean "a father's joy"?
| Anonymous Reader chapter 4 . 1/14/2009
Hehe, you watch avatar too?
So, Aang and Zuzu (sort of) are both names from Avatar: the last Airbender, Aang is the Avatar and Zuzu is the ridiculous (yet hilarious reaction provoker) of Prince (King) Zuko of the Fire Nation. Yay! I get 15 points and a bagel with cream cheese! D
| Icyhellfire chapter 4 . 4/13/2008
Oh... lovely... I read that version of Rumplestiltskin in... 7th grade I loved it... I just don't remember the author... and Aang is from the Last Airbender hehe. I like that idea of Riven and Flora... everyone in Winx Club loves someone almost exactly like them... Riven and Musa the emotionally challenged... Flora and Helia... the socially challenged the list goes on.
| Princess Kiski chapter 4 . 3/1/2008
Aang - the last airbender
Zuzu- Prince Zuko of the Avatar, nicknamed Zuzu by his psycho sister Azula.
Nice touch on this story. This story is the best version I've ever heard and I'm a C.A student in writing.
P.S- a C.A is a Ceritificate of Artistry. This will give me an edge when applying to art colleges and certifies me as a writer (sort of anyway). Too hard to explain
| spy46 chapter 4 . 2/26/2008
i know this story is old, i just cant remember the name of it.
i think you told it fairly good and all, using people from the winxclub cartoon, thou i do think more detail could have been used.
very well done story.
| spy46 chapter 3 . 2/26/2008
the king sounds like an idiot, but over all like your typical royal brat.
taking what he wants and expecting no one to say no.
thou this part of the story does seam a little short in what is going on.
could use a little more detail or some thing.