Reviews for Harry Potter and the Wastelands of Time |
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![]() ![]() Why the heck is she suddenly interfering after already seeing abnormal signs and him running?! |
![]() ![]() Pathetic why the heck aren’t you attacking the guests that weren’t mentioned before especially if they get near the girl?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck does he still have the time machine, shouldn’t it be stuck in a time loop?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck didn’t you just teleport as soon as they arrived?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck would you take risks if them potentially attacking random people would alert more powerful people?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck wouldn’t you ask it about the info about your new enemies?! |
![]() ![]() Shouldn’t you prioritize getting a new watch?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck would you give her so much info if she never actually showcased any gratefulness through her actions?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck would you tell him about the blade if you think he is dangerous?! |
![]() ![]() Why the heck didn’t the bludder explode and how are you unable to move after one attack?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start now take it home! |
![]() ![]() ![]() remarkable how accurate is your story. with hugs and kisses, Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() So ancient and powerful and supposedly better than Voldemort yet gets taken out by a no-named DE when he even has unlimited retries and apparently knew what was going to happen as well, kinda hard to enjoy this when the mc is proving to be unhinged, rambling and rather pathetic. |
![]() ![]() Although the story and the writing is top level I can't see this as a Harry Potter fic. This is a standalone fantasy novel with borrowed J.K's characters and some thing of her universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is great but Harry's thoughts are too much, I mean a quarter of chapter just talking about an apparition without actually doing it, those are damm long monologues. Another thing is the inconsistencies of the power balance, at the start of the chapter Harry said that he can destroy a complete continent and yet he struggles against two enemies that seems to be just grunts of the real antagonist. |