Reviews for Harry Potter and the Wastelands of Time
Guest chapter 10 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck is she suddenly interfering after already seeing abnormal signs and him running?!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/8/2023
Pathetic why the heck aren’t you attacking the guests that weren’t mentioned before especially if they get near the girl?!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck does he still have the time machine, shouldn’t it be stuck in a time loop?!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck didn’t you just teleport as soon as they arrived?!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck would you take risks if them potentially attacking random people would alert more powerful people?!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck wouldn’t you ask it about the info about your new enemies?!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/8/2023
Shouldn’t you prioritize getting a new watch?!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck would you give her so much info if she never actually showcased any gratefulness through her actions?!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck would you tell him about the blade if you think he is dangerous?!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/8/2023
Why the heck didn’t the bludder explode and how are you unable to move after one attack?!
Phazex chapter 31 . 9/15/2023
Great start now take it home!
piotrorszulak1 chapter 26 . 8/28/2023
remarkable how accurate is your story. with hugs and kisses, Harry
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 3 . 8/18/2023
So ancient and powerful and supposedly better than Voldemort yet gets taken out by a no-named DE when he even has unlimited retries and apparently knew what was going to happen as well, kinda hard to enjoy this when the mc is proving to be unhinged, rambling and rather pathetic.
Markan chapter 6 . 7/20/2023
Although the story and the writing is top level I can't see this as a Harry Potter fic. This is a standalone fantasy novel with borrowed J.K's characters and some thing of her universe.
Markan999 chapter 6 . 7/19/2023
The story is great but Harry's thoughts are too much, I mean a quarter of chapter just talking about an apparition without actually doing it, those are damm long monologues. Another thing is the inconsistencies of the power balance, at the start of the chapter Harry said that he can destroy a complete continent and yet he struggles against two enemies that seems to be just grunts of the real antagonist.
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