Reviews for Harry Potter and the Wastelands of Time
Markan999 chapter 6 . 7/19/2023
The story is great but Harry's thoughts are too much, I mean a quarter of chapter just talking about an apparition without actually doing it, those are damm long monologues. Another thing is the inconsistencies of the power balance, at the start of the chapter Harry said that he can destroy a complete continent and yet he struggles against two enemies that seems to be just grunts of the real antagonist.
Markan999 chapter 2 . 7/18/2023
The writing style is just wow...
brom47 chapter 31 . 2/16/2023
This is genuinely one of the best stories I‘ve ever read.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/24/2022
yea no. this is just bad. failing miserably, what a bunch of trash
Guest chapter 11 . 11/24/2022
what a bunch of trash. shitty authors trying to do epic tales and failing miserably.
hoptitu chapter 6 . 11/10/2022
Your narration is unreliable my friend. On one hand Harry saya that he has a deep understanding of magic better than most and on the other he claims that he barely understands it.

On one hand he claims he knows magic that can destroy cities, vaporise civilizations and even melt continents but when confronted with actual danger the spell he uses is reducto?

I know you're going for that mystic time-traveler vibe but that won't work unless you stick to one narrative.
dragonslayer1524 chapter 31 . 11/9/2022
If someone were to ask me to describe this story I would say it is a mash up of harry potter, the trouble and people trying to kill the whinchesters in supernatural, and some Dr. Who time travel esk shit thrown in for flavoring. Once you start reading you cannot stop and while confusing in the extreme at times just go with it, for it enhances the story all the better.
kellsworth2016 chapter 12 . 10/24/2022
I've never found a book so beautiful, so stimulating, so, so very interesting that I need a break. You, Mr. Author, should be proud, very proud indeed.
2678024 chapter 1 . 10/20/2022
This is a Top Ten read.
Very creative.
It would be nice to see a PG13 version, as I seem to remember some parts being a bit too explicit to really recommend to people who are not married.
Igniferroque chapter 19 . 10/18/2022
Good accounting for why he didn’t know how to open the gates from his past trips. Comes across as more than a simple, uninteresting macguffin.
Igniferroque chapter 18 . 10/18/2022
If Chronos wants to get into Atlantis, why does he work against Harry before Harry has opened the way?
Igniferroque chapter 17 . 10/18/2022
This may be the first HP fanfic where Harry has so many overpowered enemies. Usually, it is a cakewalk.
itllbeamiracleififinishastory chapter 1 . 10/14/2022
The writing is too pleased with itself. I really wanted to get into it, but just too long-winded.
stevem1 chapter 31 . 9/19/2022
Great story. Very superhero/demigod like.
stevem1 chapter 11 . 9/19/2022
I like this story, but Harry talks far too much in combat.
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