The story is great but Harry's thoughts are too much, I mean a quarter of chapter just talking about an apparition without actually doing it, those are damm long monologues. Another thing is the inconsistencies of the power balance, at the start of the chapter Harry said that he can destroy a complete continent and yet he struggles against two enemies that seems to be just grunts of the real antagonist.

The writing style is just wow...

This is genuinely one of the best stories I‘ve ever read.

yea no. this is just bad. failing miserably, what a bunch of trash

what a bunch of trash. shitty authors trying to do epic tales and failing miserably.

Your narration is unreliable my friend. On one hand Harry saya that he has a deep understanding of magic better than most and on the other he claims that he barely understands it.

On one hand he claims he knows magic that can destroy cities, vaporise civilizations and even melt continents but when confronted with actual danger the spell he uses is reducto?

I know you're going for that mystic time-traveler vibe but that won't work unless you stick to one narrative.

If someone were to ask me to describe this story I would say it is a mash up of harry potter, the trouble and people trying to kill the whinchesters in supernatural, and some Dr. Who time travel esk shit thrown in for flavoring. Once you start reading you cannot stop and while confusing in the extreme at times just go with it, for it enhances the story all the better.

I've never found a book so beautiful, so stimulating, so, so very interesting that I need a break. You, Mr. Author, should be proud, very proud indeed.

This is a Top Ten read.
Very creative.
It would be nice to see a PG13 version, as I seem to remember some parts being a bit too explicit to really recommend to people who are not married.

Good accounting for why he didn’t know how to open the gates from his past trips. Comes across as more than a simple, uninteresting macguffin.

If Chronos wants to get into Atlantis, why does he work against Harry before Harry has opened the way?

This may be the first HP fanfic where Harry has so many overpowered enemies. Usually, it is a cakewalk.

The writing is too pleased with itself. I really wanted to get into it, but just too long-winded.

Great story. Very superhero/demigod like.

I like this story, but Harry talks far too much in combat.