Reviews for The Genius Losers of Konoha
RaspberryUniverse chapter 35 . 4/1/2014
Yes! Finally! Thank you! Silence and curse are finally together! OMG! Kawaii!
RaspberryUniverse chapter 21 . 3/31/2014
OMG! Yes! They finally know each other's identities! I've been waiting for this for so long! I bet now things are gone get interesting... Dun...dun...dun! JK! :D
Koomba chapter 10 . 3/11/2014
Orochimaru. I'm calling it now. Even if all your badguys have been OCs so far, Orochimaru is being described with all his dirty habits except snakes in his bunghole. Like with Giza' s backstory, typical Orochimaru. That and he's coming soon with the exams coming up is a give away.
Chris ShadowMoon chapter 19 . 2/17/2014
The only swords that make any sense to me at this point, honestly, would be either Durendal or Edward the Confessor's sword, aka the 'Sword of Mercy'.
Seeker-Of-Love chapter 19 . 1/12/2014
Shia was a really nice girl but eh...whatever. I love your story. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. story. 3
Silence/Curse is the best. 3
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
so naruto is called the curse by hinata okay epic story by the way
Potterformers chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
this is crap seeya
Othinus chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Last chapter as well as this one... are you putting Naruto at disadvantage on purpose? If yes, it's stupid. Stop it. Seriously, it's stupid. If you're gonna make them equal in stuff, then make them equal.
Siggimondo chapter 21 . 10/19/2013
Finally! I've been waiting for this cat to come out of the bag. That being said, I think the timing was purrfect. And even after the big reveal, this story has only scratched the surface of its potential. Naruto might even get pussy.

Sorry about that, I was just really milking those cat puns. I regret nothing.

Jokes aside, this story is awesome. You deliver beyond my expectations every time I adjust them. Have a good day and enjoy your writing.
Siggimondo chapter 17 . 10/16/2013
Takiami was a woman who had always been seen as, and felt, powerful. Even as a mother, she used her power to protect her daughter, and only when she failed at that did she feel weak. To keep her daughter safe she worked for her captor, but she hated herself for doing so, therefore the excessive drinking and smoking, which she applied to combat so as to not be defeated by her woes. Right?
Siggimondo chapter 4 . 10/14/2013
Love it so far, don't have time to review, must keep reading.
RykOakwine chapter 8 . 9/30/2013
Things were going ok until this chapter.

A. when did your Naruto acquire ths sharingan? He freely makes reference to copying jutsu's from zabuza in this chapter, a talent only this with the sharingan have.
B. Water clones have a very limited range, they can't move far from their creator, which is why kakashi tried to convince his three geninto run away from zabuzas water clone when zabuza caught kakashi in that water prison technique. Also, only shadow clones can operate independently and send memories back to the creator, which is why shadow clones are the best form of that series of jutsu and on the forbidden scroll. But, yeah, the limited range thing on water clones, that's just a well known aspect of that jutsu.
C. Too many crossover or OC elements are being thrown in. It's distracting from your story, it really is. Keep piling on mystery people and your reader eventually doesn't care who any of them are, no matter how clever you think you are being.
D. Hinata is acting way too much like a steampunk engineering prodigy and not enough like a ninja, imho. She can power her creations with chakra, seals, fire jutsu, etc, but instead she thinks of batteries first? That's just not a reasonable train of thought for someone who has access to a source that actually violates the Law Of Conservation Of Energy (namely nina chakra and the various ninjutsu).

I'll keep reading, but I'm hoping basic setting concepts, like the very limited range of water clones, and the mystery sharingan ability Naruto seems to have settles out and stops being a distraction from the story.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2013
I support your idea.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
I think its great!
FallenHuntr chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
:D
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