|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit|
| may lee and ty lee chapter 24 . 2/25
Wow great story. I like the Conner dude
| GrammerGirl chapter 5 . 2/3
No offense Taters, but you have atrocious spelling and grammar. P.S. atrocious means horrible.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/2/2013
What happened to Charlie?
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
They are really acting stupid. If someone hasn't seen them already, they will soon. In a town as small as Forks, they should not be interacting at all except in the classroom. Winking, smiling, kissing, and thinking no one will notice?! DUMB.
| VioletRiddleLover chapter 23 . 8/24/2013
oh my goodness this was an amazing story i read through the entire story without stopping and I LOVED IT, Every bit of it, and you know what this was my favorite bella and edward (all human) story. AND... the last sentence was THE perfect ending to the story
| Annie 3 chapter 24 . 6/9/2013
I LOVE IT! So much love and drama! WELL DONE!
| sonogal chapter 24 . 3/22/2013
This was a cute story. You did a good job.
| sonogal chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
I was waiting for him to show up. I really like this story. I am glad you made Bella already 18.
| sonogal chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This sounds interesting.
| Sarahlovestwilightmorethanlife chapter 26 . 2/10/2013
This was so amazing! I was crying SO hard during the last few chapters!
| EclipseoftheTwilightMoon chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
I know you've heard it before, but I will say it again. Any story has potential but you have to use good grammar, sentence structure, and actually proofread our work. I didn't even read everything to this point, I just scanned to see if it got any better and something you wrote in a note annoyed me a little. You stated that your grammar wasn't good because you were from Tennessee, that's not an excuse! Take the advice and work on developing your characters and plot and grammar. Don't give up, you can do it. Just takes work.
| AnnaJessieDiaz chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I love this 3
| PushingReality34 chapter 5 . 12/6/2012
I really think that this story could have gone somewhere. Unforunately, that somewhere you drove it was straight off a cliff. Not only did you demand a certain number of reviews before you would update, you sound like a raging homophob in this chapter. Maybe the Connor in your class is annoying and we don't know the full story, but it is your job as a writer to explain it to us. Make you believe as you do, but sadly the only reason the you gave us to view Connor in a negative way, which is what you were trying to do by the way, was that he was gay, and all you did by doing that was make a lot of people just stop reading your story.
I am one of the people. I don't mean to be rude, bu maybe if someone tells you, you won't make the same mistake in the future.
| BELAVERA chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
I like it very much. I am always glad to see Bella get away from abuse. I hope you can keep her out of trouble.
| tigerquill1015 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
well you definantly kept me on the edge of my seat! Great story but it needs a sequel