|Reviews for Our Sweet Romance|
| Manillalu chapter 1 . 5/30
So cuuuute! The steamy sort of sweet that gives me cavities. But so good
| Daphmir57 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
This is the basics structure of what a relationship between these two would be likes. This was nots just a fuck, buts you coulds actually feel the love in each sentence. Aideu Ands remember, don'ts apologize for somethings you enjoyed!
| mu149 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
That was amazing!You're now officially on my favorites list!
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
| Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
i loved it. simply loved it. it was sweet and sexy.
| KiTsUnE-cHaN18 chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
AH! So fluffly that it makes me want to just hug it! :3 great job! i love ur story!
| KilaIesha a.k.a Gaara'sGirl12 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
AW! So kawaii! It was really good!
| asm613 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
you wrote: (Plus they couldn’t go to one another’s house because Sasukes was watched after the Orochimaru thing)_
they only watched sasuke's house? Seems like they would have Sasuke followed as well-doing one without the other doesn't make much sense. He could do far more damage away from his house than in it.
Also-you used the word 'boy', 'boys', 'the boy' and other variations of BOY 30 times in this short story. Should come up with other descriptive words. I noticed a lot of it in the brothers who love each other story as well.
Other than those 2 pretty minor things-the story was entertaining. thanks for sharing it.
| Anihihi chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Oh! That Wonderful Forbidden Love!
That Sasuke blushing think at the end, was zo cute! xD
| Wawfer chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
How cute! lol i loved it thanks for uploading :)
| Gothic Anime Lover chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
hahahahahahahah! sasuke blushed! XD this was GOOD! i loved it! romantic and smexy! XD the perfect combo!
| DizziKatz chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
This was amazing, and I really enjoyed it! Thank Goodness...this was so IC! You captured them perfectly, and this was such a wonderful oneshot. This is going into the favs. This has brightened my day! You're an amazing writer, awesome job.
| PapettomasutaDartz chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Aww how sweet I loved this story nice job_
| Basilisc chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Great story !
| alphabeticalescape chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
How cute. Just so you know, it's El Fin. Sorry, I'm Dominican.