Reviews for Father and Son
HPMarvel chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
It's crazy to know that this story was written 2 months before I was born. It's an amazing story and I'm sure you take pride in knowing that your stories are timeless.
RavenLu22 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
I really loved this. I was either smiling or laughing all the way through. You have captured the character of Young Luke perfectly. Well Done
StarFlight13 chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
I love this! It's really realistic and I do think that if Vader had found Luke when he was younger then Luke would have become an extremely powerful Sith, as powerful, if not more powerful than the Emperor. The only other thing I would add is that Obi-Wan Kenobi probably would have found Leia as his second choice of apprentice, and train her until she could take down Vader. If they met then there would be a story to tell. Although the fact that Luke followed the ways of the Sith but also had the peace of a Jedi means he would be much more powerful Force-User, maybe constructing a double light sabre that was both green and red, representing the light and dark side of the force. The peace keeper. Kinda like the Yin and Yang. He could train the children who are force-sensitive, whether they are Sith or Jedi. After all, in the films the dark was not specifically said to have been bad and the light was not altogether good. They were simply opposites. Now I'm boring you with this long-winded speech. It is a good idea though, and I like your style of writing. keep it up!
The Hope Lions chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
I was four months old when you wrote this. I keep using the word timeless for your stories because it's very accurate.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxyxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Good story
Ghoul99 chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
I love it
SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Makorra chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Written in 1998? That's really a coincidence because I was two years old at the time. But lovely story! I really love the depth of it.
NikoR6 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Correction: I don't think Vader would say that Coruscant is 'totally covered with buildings', but rather say 'completely covered in buildings'. Good story by the way :-)
bec chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Loved it.
Dark Song 87 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Princess613 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Have you ever spent time with a two year old?
sweetyamiyugigirl chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Neat... you have written a couple dark luke fics... fascinating.
Taboo22 chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I think that the story is well written, but I noticed lukes developement and verbal skills and it would be unlikely that he was only two even if he was closer to three in such an environment his progress would not be that far along. thank you for the wonderful story hope you post more.
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