Lol, it seems that the author forgot that Halsey DID have a child, Miranda Keys was her daughter.

Well Deje and everyone in ONI and the UNSC who were involved in the this frankly immersion brakingly moronic chapter get killed by the Chief and other Spartans for doing this. They certainly deserve it.

Depicting the Spartans as casual sex having, hit it and quit it types in this chapter is both canonically inaccurate and simply in bad taste.

This has been a decent story so far but this chapters whole scene with Catherine Halsey was dumb as hell.

How do they have a one ton suit of armor sitting on their conference table lol.

I don't buy the Chief letting them take his armor from him.

The Master Chief's dialogue in this is very bad.

Wow, you can really tell that this was written by an author with a little to no experience writing dialogue or conveying the voices of pre-existing characters. The Master Chief and Starbuck do not sound anything like the Canon Master Chief and Starbuck here.

Excellent; you did a terrific job combining two different storylines.

A CAG named McQueen,a pilot called T.C. I sense a "Space Above and Beyond" shout out.

I'm growing really fond of this story. Well done!

Explain the fucking plot holes? No? Don't waste your time with this fucking garbage.

Question where the frack did the grave mind quote come from?

What you say at the end is true

Well done! I really enjoyed this piece and am very grateful that you finished it. Thank you so much.