Just started this story and it's definitely caught my attention. You've got the personalities down for sure. Does need to be edited for spelling very badly though.

For anyone unaware, the author passed away a couple months back due to health complications. :(

Well hot dang! This was a fun read! And it is so nice when things wrap up like this. Not the supper happy ending, but the close enough to the supper happy ending that leaves a good taste behind. Thank you for the story!

Oh I read this all in one day, spectacular

Never watched battle star Galactica but if you're writing the characters as they act in the tv show then damn they fucking annoying.

Ay ok this chapter definitely got the hopes back up.

Bruh I swear if you make Masterchief roll over for these randoms and somehow let un-augmented non-UNSC personnel man mjolnir armor I'm out. The plots decent but the writing is eh so kinda hanging on by a thread here

Yeah as the story goes on it seems less like Master Chief is in it and more like you replaced him with a weaker submissive version.

I don’t think the master chief would take off his armor in a place that’s not part of the UNSC, doesn’t seem like something he would do at all.

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Hi, Dan from reddit here! I don't have time to read the full fic, but I did go over a few chapters to get a sense of everything. I really like how the Marines have consistent and natural dialogue and lingo, and how Cortana doesn't quite recognize it at first. The action scenes were all pretty tight and well-written, I could get a good sense of where everything was most of the time. Fandom-blind to both outside of broad strokes, but I do appreciate everyone has a distinct voice. Great work!

Spartans vs aircraft/spacecraft, that never gets old. I distinctly recall reading similar scenes in other fics but I'm pretty sure this one's is the oldest of the bunch. Great scene and a fun chapter overall.

The Chief getting his arsenal scene feels more like Doom rather than Halo, but then again he's a supersoldier and surely can carry more than two/three small arms on any given occasion. To me, it's a perfectly fine break from the two-guns formula Halo itself created.

Also, if only he was packing M6Ds; then he'd probably conquer the entire Battlestar universe with those Magnums alone.

A promising and engaging start. Dunno anything about Battlestar but I'm just as intrigued by their culture as much as the actual story, these mentions of "Caprican" language and whatnot.

"a red light started to blink..." - I like where this is going!

I’m not very far but my gut tells me the one true god is guilty spark 343