|Reviews for Pretend|
| Kariesue chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Awesome! Love how Teyla says she'll never be able to eat next to John again. Very nice build up and love how they start with a little one upping game but it backfires on them but the end is so sweet. Thanks!
| sagey chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
they should have had this on tv...a whole episode just with this story...
loved it..adn so hot hot hot...but so sensual and sweet..and funny...always good to have humor...
| noraily chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
That was G-R-E-A-T ! Cute and hot at the same time ! I highly enjoyed reading this !
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
| Bandbabe chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
That was hot! Great story!
| Tania chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Fantastic. I have read this story before but I always forget to leave a review. I loved it!
| LAIsobel chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Nice, hot, sweet and funny :o)
| dispatcher652 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
That was a good story and man was it HOT!
| Kaito Yukimura chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
this story was amazing. i would love if you continued the story and it dosent matter if you add more lemons or not.
| DevineM27 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
PERFECT! I LOVE hot and heavy JT. Very cute, very good.
| Linyke chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Great story, wasn't really a fan of John and Teyla, but am now.
| CazzBlade chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
| da-super-dude chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
I love this story. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story before. I love all your Sheyla stories. You take plots that could have been overdone and boring and turn them into . . . well . . . whatever it is you turn them into. : I've reread this story so many times. It just doesn't get old.
| HemeraNyx chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
That was Fan-Flipping-Tastic! It was sensual, sexy, emotional, and you threw smokin' hot sex in there too! Bless you and your beautiful brain. Keep up the amazing work!
| Thayne M chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Okay, I have officially read this whole story six times now. _ I tallied it and everything. Its just so...sexy! Each time, after I finished the last line, my first thought was "my god, I wish I had a nice boy to call over RIGHT NOW." Haha. This is definitely one of my all-time favourite Sheyla fics out there, and that's saying something, because I've read TONS of really good Sheyla fics.
Everything about this was amazing. The imagery, especially; you painted a picture with colours and textures and feelings. Especially feelings. I could almost feel John Sheppard's hand on my leg while I was reading that, and lemme tell ya, of all the psychosomatic sensations I've experienced in my life, that was definitely NOT one of the bad ones!
Amazing all around. I applaud you!