|Reviews for Livewire|
| Bassclone13 chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Wow, this story isn't bad at all. I love the Naruto and Haku parts of it and sometimes how Sasuke is learning, I know Sharingan isn't all powerful but I'd still like to see more action out of it. And for some reason, I just don't like how Sakura is. At all. I don't really have any idea why though, I'm sorry to say.
It's not because your a bad writer, not at all. Your very awesome, haha. It's probably because I've always HATED how any chick in any manga/anime is some violent bitch (And when I say bitch, I don't mean it at Sakura or anything, just how pretty much I see it.) who puts down a character who's nicer than Hell or beats the crap outta him for nothing. Love Hina's Naru, Negima!'s Asuna (Doesn't really hit the main character, but is just a bit mean and put down overall in my opinion), and Sakura from Naruto all reminds me of this. And to see Sakura get way more powerful and still have that attitude? I want to punch something. Again, it's not you, it's me, haha. I'll most likely be hesitant from this story for a little while or possibly ever. It's still great though
On a later note, right when Naruto started using his wires I instantly thought of Walter from Hellsing. And that made the story more awesome. xD
| Smokey.Blade chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Man this story has so much EPIC WIN it makes my eyes bleed while i read it!
Seriously man this story is great, i'm a little disgruntled that it has not been updated for awhile but i will keep checking up on it periodically.
I'll be looking forward to future chapters, keep up the awesome work!
| King Hawke chapter 6 . 8/15/2008
I almost pity team 7, if I didn't think they could handle it. I very much like that you turned Sasuke into something other than a homocidal emo, and you turned Sakura into a useful teammember for a change. I Really like the wires! that is awesome on how they are able to use them so well. keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of this story.
| crewger chan chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
OMG, the side with Sakura and Icha Icha Paradise is so original and rich! At first, I thought you were going to bash the characters left and right, but you DIDN"T!
You're my hero o
| Lunatic Pandora1 chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
Hmm, this looks like it could become a totally sweet Naruto/Haku fic. Which is saying a lot coming from me, as I generally dislike those, but the potential in this one is simply overwhelming.
| R.O.S chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
...Why do I suddenly think Naruto is the reincarnation of Dan?
| HolyKnight5 chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Any hope for a future update with this masterpiece?
| Flamesoot chapter 6 . 8/9/2008
It'd also be cool to see the rest of the Rookie Nine's reactions to their training regiment or some such.
| FaerysWing chapter 6 . 7/30/2008
Ah,such fun Kakashi is having. Are they going to do the Chunnin exam? If so, I can't wait to know the reactions of the other rookies and co.
| Aino Ailill chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
I love what you've done with Sakura.
| Michi P chapter 6 . 7/23/2008
This is so well written! Great storyline, it's an original plot. Coming up with the wires was brilliant, and it's an interesting concept. Great job, can't wait to read more!
| Nosferatum chapter 6 . 7/21/2008
Very interesting. How can you keep writing so many fics in the same universe with the same but decidedly different characters?
| Amy chapter 6 . 7/19/2008
I don't review - period. When I do, it means something has knocked me off my seat by being too amazing for words. Or it means I haven't slept in awhile, a VERY LONG while. Despite the occasional grammatical issue and a sometimes improper format, I find the story rather good and at times very funny. In me speak, "THAT WAS SO COOL! DO IT AGAIN PLEASE!". Almost a five star-a reward yet to be received by more than a handful of writers so don't feel bad. Do what you want with it, but so far I haven't found anything major to complain about. Thanks for brightening my day!
(Major universal sized catastrophe)
| FluffyNevyn chapter 6 . 7/16/2008
Good story. You need to include a bit more on who or what naruto is remembering there. I have some ideas, but they could either be completely useless or totally off the mark. The first feeling i got was that he was channeling "Dan"...but now im not so sure it wasnt someone from an even more distant past and both of "them" have been reborn.
anyway, keep writing, and ill keep reading
| Almores chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Is the mystery Woman Tsunade by some chance?