|Reviews for Livewire|
| Impstar chapter 6 . 4/29/2012
An amazingly well written story. Very heavy though... not for a person wanting a laugh. I hope that one day this story is continued, but it won't happen.
| BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 6 . 4/19/2012
I'd love to see more of this with Haku being encouraged to start family with Naruto and I can't wait to see how Tsunade and Naruto will react to meeting each other,
| Stahchild chapter 3 . 4/12/2012
Lmfao he gave his student porn? That is hella funny :)
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 6 . 1/29/2012
I love this story. Perverted Sakura, lmfao. Poor team seven, kakashi's being cruel tying them together and forcing them to fight a jonin. Poor Sasuke, pink shorts, rotfl. I can't say how much I love this story. Please continue.
| Bored and Sleepy with Waffles chapter 6 . 1/11/2012
I've just read through the whole of your Naruto fanfictions, and while I wish to say that I'm in (to use such an overused word) awe, I'm afraid I can't. I can't say I'm in awe of your work because awe is such an inadequate word to describe the full depth of my appreciation for your work. All of your pieces have a different tone to them, each their own distinct flavor, and your characterization is masterful. Livewire, however, struck me as the most compelling of your fic's. You took the canon characters, by the book Sakura, Angsty power-crazed Sasuke, and human punching-bag Naruto, and developed them beautifully in a manner that leaves absolutely no question to your grasp on not on the source material, but the much more delicate and complex psychological implications of child soldiers. I was stunned by the incredible way you handled Sakura on the bridge, and I find myself enjoying her character as much as Naruto's. I've, quite honestly, never read a story that actually left me sad to see that there wasn't more coming when I reached the end. As the chapters whittled away, I grew more and more apprehensive because I knew that, while I was devouring an amazing story, I was also reaching the end (for now), which quite honestly mad me sad. I completely understand your having placed this kind of work on the back-burner as far as priorities go, and I'll not attempt to argue that you ought to hop back on it. I would instead simply like to thank you for what you've contributed to the fandom, and offer my most sincere hopes that you achieve whatever level of success it is you pursue in any endeavors. Should you end up continuing to write on this site, I will no doubt continue to read of the wonderous tales you've crafted from Mr. Kishimoto's world. If not, then I will simply say that I have enjoyed seeing one of the best examples of the 10% of fanfics worth reading. Either way, you have most assuredly won a fan sir (or ma'am, I couldn't divine that out for myself, so I figure it's safe to cover my bases).
May words never escape you,
| Thoriyan chapter 6 . 12/6/2011
Holy crap this story is definitely worth continuing. Love the character development and unique twists: wires, swords, and porn...really worth continuing and finishing. Keep up the good work!
| Moka-girl chapter 6 . 8/28/2011
Team seven is a real team this time! Teamwork, baby!
| Moka-girl chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Damn cool! Super!Naruto!
| animelover chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
this is great! why wont you update! i like how this story has plot divelopment and stuff. But come on! UPDATE SOON!
| Orain chapter 6 . 8/2/2011
Awesome. Just...yea, most of your work is, but damn I wished it'd be updated.
| andrewmoda5033 chapter 6 . 6/28/2011
This is an amzingly original story, and I beg you to update it. It has the perfect amount of everything to make it all fit together amazingly.
| everfrozen chapter 6 . 6/14/2011
What's going to happen to them? Oh boy I can't wait! Keep up the good work!
| Sheaman chapter 6 . 6/3/2011
This is quite the interesting story. Not as interesting as Reload, perhaps, but still, a very good read, and one that I would like to see updated, should you ever decide to return to it.
| templar627 chapter 6 . 5/29/2011
Great story so far, I really like the way that naruto changed especially how he changed his goal to meeting the woman.
| Oderin-Kuro chapter 6 . 5/28/2011
Great fanfic! Pleases update this asap!