Reviews for Livewire
librarycat9 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
that was as confusing as hell... but I am totally hooked... lol
Nightblade1021 chapter 6 . 12/4/2010
This story is amazing. The only person who has a fighting style to this Naruto is Walter from Hellsing. How did you come up with it.
BluWriter chapter 6 . 11/28/2010
I'm actually kind of sad Mr. (Or Ms.?) Case13.

This is one of the greatest pieces of Fanfiction I've read. I first read this about two years ago, and it absolutely blew me away.

This is a shining example of how fanfiction should be written. I'm just a bit sad that, even after 2 years, there still hasn't been an update.

Please don't kill this fic off. It's too well written to deserve something like that.
Belle Mort 13 chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
I have recently been working through all your stories one by one and I have concluded that you are definatly one of the best writers on this site

this story is fantastic

occaisionaly someone mentions wire in their stories but they almost never elaborate

I am very impressed
iamnuff chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
dan and tsunade?

just a guess but all clues point to that
Godogma chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Can you make a chapter feel more disjointed than this? Honestly, if I can't read it and enjoy it I'm not going to attempt to schlog through it.

My hearty recommendation is that you sit down and rewrite this beginning section so its less of an eyesore and makes some sort of sense.
bakapervert chapter 6 . 6/4/2010
Continue this story please, and your other story too. Prettttttyyyyyy pplllllllleeaeaaaaasssseeee.
bakapervert chapter 4 . 6/4/2010
Kakashi's genin won't inherit his mania huh, if only Sarutobi know. Sakura's really become his apprentice huh, porn and sword. Really a master-student relationship in its finest. And Kakashi is really cool here, like a perfect teacher. And in the end it's cool too.
bakapervert chapter 3 . 6/4/2010
So Salura is not useless here, and you even manage to make her a shinobi, and Kakashi's true student even. Damn it's good.
bakapervert chapter 2 . 6/4/2010
Wire master huh. Cool.
Greysh chapter 6 . 6/1/2010
great fic! I love how you write kakashi :)

sakura is a lot better than in canon! I like that. the training is believable.

I hope that you will continue with this fic someday! It's a great read. Please don't abandone it.

good luck with your writting.
nimb09 chapter 4 . 5/3/2010
like the kakashi speech at the end
nimb09 chapter 3 . 5/3/2010
icha icha the gift for mankind everywhere
nimb09 chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
great chapter just love it.
nimb09 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
remind me of the angle of death in hellsing. he was awesome. got to read the next chapter
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