Reviews for Livewire
librarycat9 chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
lol Oh I seriously want another chapter of this... Is Sasuke going to rent Naruto a house in the Uchiha district?
librarycat9 chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
how utterly and completely frustrating... thats like studying a song for 6 weeks, becoming able to practically sing it in your sleep and the day of juries (test) not being able to recall any of the words... only bigger...
librarycat9 chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
thats nice :D Sasuke and Kakashi both with wake up calls that worked...
librarycat9 chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
LOL he seriously started her on porn? *giggle* Tsunami is going to strangle him...
librarycat9 chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
lol Haku is a girl again... Naruto is going to be ticked though...
librarycat9 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
that was as confusing as hell... but I am totally hooked... lol
Skybreaker30 chapter 6 . 12/4/2010
This story is amazing. The only person who has a fighting style to this Naruto is Walter from Hellsing. How did you come up with it.
BluWriter chapter 6 . 11/28/2010
I'm actually kind of sad Mr. (Or Ms.?) Case13.

This is one of the greatest pieces of Fanfiction I've read. I first read this about two years ago, and it absolutely blew me away.

This is a shining example of how fanfiction should be written. I'm just a bit sad that, even after 2 years, there still hasn't been an update.

Please don't kill this fic off. It's too well written to deserve something like that.
Belle Mort 13 chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
I have recently been working through all your stories one by one and I have concluded that you are definatly one of the best writers on this site

this story is fantastic

occaisionaly someone mentions wire in their stories but they almost never elaborate

I am very impressed
iamnuff chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
dan and tsunade?

just a guess but all clues point to that
Godogma chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Can you make a chapter feel more disjointed than this? Honestly, if I can't read it and enjoy it I'm not going to attempt to schlog through it.

My hearty recommendation is that you sit down and rewrite this beginning section so its less of an eyesore and makes some sort of sense.
bakapervert chapter 6 . 6/4/2010
Continue this story please, and your other story too. Prettttttyyyyyy pplllllllleeaeaaaaasssseeee.
bakapervert chapter 4 . 6/4/2010
Kakashi's genin won't inherit his mania huh, if only Sarutobi know. Sakura's really become his apprentice huh, porn and sword. Really a master-student relationship in its finest. And Kakashi is really cool here, like a perfect teacher. And in the end it's cool too.
bakapervert chapter 3 . 6/4/2010
So Salura is not useless here, and you even manage to make her a shinobi, and Kakashi's true student even. Damn it's good.
bakapervert chapter 2 . 6/4/2010
Wire master huh. Cool.
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