Reviews for On Needing
IllaSc chapter 1 . 2/17/2008

Wow, this is really good. I like the way you write. Update soon?
teddydevilbeaniegaararox chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
SpillietehInkie chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
twin... hmm... I'm confused a bit... but whatever, you'll explain it in the long run. update soon!
Krizzie chapter 1 . 2/15/2008

my jaw dropped too. -waits for the next chappie-
AyakaSorii chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Hey. HEy.. HEY! HEY! Please update SOON! Its been a pretty long while but chyea... Besides that.. I liked the story. It was good. OH! And please PLease PLEASE make them talk more and less details. thanx

Ja Ne:

piixiiestiix chapter 1 . 2/15/2008

Glad you're back!

that was one hell of a cliffhanger...
Melissax3 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
i really like it

is this going to be a long story? like 10 chapters...or more like 3?
hellobaby chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
It's great to see that you're back, and I'm thrilled to read your new story.

I hope you find time in your busy schedule to update soon.


angelgrl chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
what? that was wierd. the part with the twins and patience and twin brothers. im pretty sure that that will be later explained. i really like your comparisons, especially when you compared the sun to her watch. that was nice. just remember to watch out for your tenses. i just spotted a tiny mistake in here, nothing big, but just cautioning you and i wish you a happy valentine's day too. welcome back to fanfiction!
dreaming.sapphire chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Wow, I'd love to see more of this. _
mintxrain chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Im confused on the paitience and charm thing... Is the dude cute or something?
filofobiklaz chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
omg.. im soo glad you're back! im a huge fan of your fics.. though i don't usually write reviews.. i made one just

to welcome you back. ) ..i really loove how you write your stories. _
Jilliankate chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
awesome cant wait for it to be continued
LaylaPlum chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Oh wow. ] Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lutralutra chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Interesting beginning, foreshadowing lots of great writing to come. Ah, cold Neji, rejecting Tenten's pure-hearted advances (gah, I sound like Lee). But we all know there's more to the relationship than a "no".

“Do you have other plans for tonight?” He knew there was none; it was his veiled way of stating, ‘Did you just say ‘no’ to me?’.

Love that - it's so Neji. He's really quite direct and unspoken once you learn to look past the crypticness. Great characterization, smooth dialogue.

I'll be waiting for an update from one of the best-loved NejiTen authors on FF. Keep up the good work! :)
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