Reviews for A Million Pieces
bumblebee145 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
when a writer can make the death of a loved character(personally my second fave character :]) a beautiful thing then they are truely gifted and talented.
ilovepeterpetrelli chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
That was really good.
Serenity Hope chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
oh yeah! It was really really well written but maybe you could just add a "River shed a silent tear as she told Mal the story." I like tragedy too but this one just makes me wanna shoot Mal! Anyway despite the critique it was really good.
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Ya know...I wanna say "Poor, poor Mal" and all, but I really can't muster the energy. Mainly because he's come to realize the eternal truth at the exact moment it's really not worth much except cold comfort. Oh, to have this be a premonition!