|Reviews for LICK UR LOLLIPOP|
| DarkMiko6 chapter 12 . 9/30/2016
So, English is your second/third language right? Because if it isn't, you really need to retake your English class (if you are finished your school), like seriously, the grammar and the spelling of this fanfic are horrible.
If English is your second or third language then I can understand and this fanfiction of yours might be forgiven for that reason. (By the way, English is my second )
For the characters, I think the characters those aren't OOC are Caiptain Unohana, Yachiru, Captain Kurotsuchi and Yama-jii.
But then this is ByaIchi fanfic, how can these two act so OOC? (especially Byakuya lol. Example: 'luv' ? I utterly doubt he will use that kind of word and speak like that. It sound so wrong at )
Actually, I didn't mind OOC fanfic but this absolute ridiculous grammar and spelling make me want to cry for brain damaged.
And at last, please buy English dictionary.
| sarah chapter 12 . 6/21/2016
please please update !
i don't ike this cliffanger!
i'm gonna kill this kuchiki !
| Ashesofthefirststar chapter 12 . 6/7/2016
Dude, I gotta say, as a hard core ByaIchi shipper, I'm really pissed at this story. First off, I think it's horrible you've portrayed Byakuya this way. This isn't who he is. I get we all have different interuptations of characters, but this is just down right insulting. He's not a rapist/abuser. He can be cold and a bit controlling, but never this way. He's actually extremely caring and tender underneath it all.
More so, you've said their soul mates, which means your romantizing abuse. THAT'S NOT OKAY. There is nothing loving or beautiful or romantic about abusing someone or rapping someone. Honestly, I'm sad so many people actually enjoy this story, because that just show's how fuck up and unhealthy most peoples idea of love is. Seriously, this had a lot of good humor and a lot of potential. I really wish you'll consider what I'm saying about this. I rarely put "flames" on peoples stories. Honestly, this is the first, but that just shows how messed up this story is. Seriously, you're pushing it man. I really hope you turn this around in some way, but I don't think that's possible seeing as you created Byakuya into this total monster.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/16/2016
Why did you stop this story, it has so much more potential. I love it, PLEASE SAVE IT!
| hopelessfreakz chapter 12 . 11/14/2015
can u update pls
| nopnop chapter 12 . 9/30/2015
Very interesting stoey..
Can't wait for new chapters...
Pkease update soon :-)
| ShadowKitten14 chapter 12 . 9/7/2015
Oh my gosh. This was so sad, I can't stop crying right now. I would really love this to be updated even though the last chapter was added in 2009. Darn that Byakuya! I am amazed at how well Byakuya's love and possessiveness is conveyed.
| Eumenida chapter 11 . 5/23/2015
are you going to update chapter 13 any time soon? plzzzzz...
| Angelfairy25 chapter 3 . 4/14/2015
Amazing! Poor Ichigo!
| Angelfairy25 chapter 2 . 4/13/2015
| Angelfairy25 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
| Eumenida chapter 12 . 3/28/2015
come on ... its more drama now... i hope that it won't be so serius ... i need to laugh... i am amazed by your imagination and creactivity... thank you ... i am waiting for the next chapter ... don't be too late plz ...
| Eumenida chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
honestly ... when i read it i started laugh for half an hour ... you gave me happy tears ... i am still crying ... form laughs ... thank you.
| AkiraNatsume chapter 12 . 2/4/2015
That was fascinating. More chapters please. I eagerly await your next one.
| Altira chapter 12 . 12/9/2014
I know this is discontinued but still. First Ichigo x Byakuya story. This story makes me hate the stupid goddamn pairing. Mostly Byakuya. I mean the story was well written but frick dude I hate Byakuya.