Reviews for A Father's Wrath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() only one ninja they knew could use the Kage Bushin, as it was a forbidden technique and the scroll that contained it was nearly stolen by Mizuki who was stopped by Iruka and Naruto. And Naruto had when tricked by Mizuki had learned the jutsu and used it to stop him. He was the only one to know that jutsu so it was confusing as to why Raidou knew it as well. In truth nearly every chunin and jonin knows it, it is not forbidden in same way as we forbid some things, people are just told to be carefull with shadow clones cos is can kill them. So Naruto isn't only one. Hell even Konohamaru. Who is like 9 years old can use few shadow clone at same time. Sasuke knows shadow clone technique. Kakashi knows it Jiraya knows it Tsunade knows is AND used it while training Sakura I know this is old fic. But I had to mention it. So if you ever again write a fic you make it better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn't Naruto able to absorb other people's chakra? Why didn't he just used that ability plus clones and just drained his opponent, if you aren't going to let characters use their abilities then just give them this abilities. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your students are skilled, more than you think they are, especially the blonde one, you think of them as helpless children, unable to defend themselves. You appear to be a jonin, does Konoha now have its ninja obtain that rank by those who put their tails in between their legs and run at the first sight of danger?" Kakashi and Keiya stared face to face at one another. "Why are asking me this? I am not afraid and I would willingly take the man and protect him to Wave!" "Then prove it! Show your courage to me, all ninja must get rid of their fear, it seems to me that you still have some in you, prove to me and your students that you are not a coward and guide the man to Wave!" Kakashi walked away from him and went towards his students. "So what's it gonna be? This mission has become much more dangerous now and we could very well die, if any of you want to head back to Konoha you know the way. Which of you will stay?" Why are characters retarded? By all means Kakashi would leave this mission, because he would consider it as trap. A iwa Shinobi talling him to go to other country which doesn't have konoha Shinobi in it. Yeah how could this be trap? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...idea isn't bad, but you glazed Itachi's information too much, he wouldn't have any knowledge about Uzumaki Kushina's son. You also seem to make Orochimaru a dumbass, not one of worlds smartest person who is one of best manipulator on planet. He tells to much, to people who can sell/use this information against him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He is my son, and I'm sure you have witnessed the treatment he has gotten from those maggots!" This line makes no sense, at that Time Kabuto was Sasori's agent, not to mention Kabuto wasn't loyal to Orochimaru, even in chunin exams, Kabuto thinks about the ways to play Orochimaru. Like him trying to kill Sasuke, just so Orochimaru's plans would not work that well. So tell me, why would Orochimaru tell Kabuto, a known spy, about his son? Why would he make so big mistake? |
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![]() ![]() Psalm 147 verse 3 He(The Lord Jehovah, Father of Lord Jesus Christ) healeth the broken in heart, and bindeth up their wounds. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck another beta bitch Naruto and here i had high hopes for this one but its hust another trash fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kill the kazekage. He deserves it in this. |
![]() ![]() God I wish I could get into this story, it's long and actually finished! But damn is the writing style awful, show don't tell, this is what an author should aspire to. Instead this story just narrates what happens without giving context, the timeskips and flashbacks detract from the story and the dialog is poorly written. Perhaps towards the middle or end this gets better, but I'm just not willing to wait that long for a story to get good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kudos for the idea, hell lots of kudos for making it to chap 87 |
![]() ![]() Now why would he reveal his whole plan orochimaru that fool |
![]() ![]() ![]() You dumbass they only discovered Orochimarus experiments after Narutos birth retard Tf how the fuxk would the 9tails attack if Kushina is still fine are you retarded |
![]() ![]() ![]() You dumbass they only discovered Orochimarus experiments after Narutos birth retard Tf how the fuxk would the 9tails attack if Kushina is still fine are you retarded |