|Reviews for A Father's Wrath|
| 246vili chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
Nice fight between The two Akatsuki member, with one being now an ex-member.
| 246vili chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
The way Orochimaru take care of his son is really cute and sooooo OOC from him. But I like it in a way. I mean the snake sannin being a caring father is something you don't read many times. It makes the story more unique in a good way.
| 246vili chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Orochimaru is Naruto's father!? You were right, this fact itself is way OOC for him.
Can't wait to find out what will hapen next.
| dveth chapter 15 . 6/29/2013
Your portrayal of Tayuya here is terrible. First, Tayuya hits Naruto once and is then ordered to be his servant as a punishment. But then Naruto lets her hit him repeatedly and neither Naruto nor Orochimaru punishes her for it? That doesn't make any sense. There's no point in writing that Tayuya's a servant if she isn't going to be treated as one by anybody.
| PorkKage chapter 87 . 6/11/2013
An excellent story. I especially liked the characterization of Orochimaru.
| Igor De Souza Santos chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 15 . 6/1/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 14 . 5/31/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 13 . 5/31/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 12 . 5/31/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 11 . 5/31/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 10 . 5/31/2013
Much different then Canon.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 9 . 5/31/2013
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 8 . 5/31/2013
Poor Kid, IF this was real life I'd adopt him and run away with the kid.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 7 . 5/31/2013