Reviews for A Father's Wrath
Guest chapter 22 . 2/26/2014
Ur grammer is a little bad and u r missing some words when u type ur story
Guest chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
Nice story
The Fox Arrancar chapter 42 . 2/16/2014
Otosan is with a o not au okay Dude
246vili chapter 87 . 12/10/2013
WTFH?! You left Muta live and be the newest menber of Akatsuki? Well, I didn't see that one coming, nice twist.
Btw, I'm suprised you haven't made a maudlin farewell-sceen with Naruto and Tayuya, though that wouldn't be their stile.

Overall, your story was good and I'm sure will read the sequel.
246vili chapter 86 . 12/10/2013
Well Keiji didn't made it easy for them, but it is over. The final fight was well written. Nice work.
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 18 . 11/28/2013
ok wheres teh update
Guest chapter 17 . 11/28/2013
finished this chapter
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 16 . 11/28/2013
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
not much of a challenge. the dragon.
Could have been a better battle scene and Orochimaru's analysis seemed kinda sloppy.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
why isn't he plannining to take his son out of the place that he'll be a pariah? I mean, true...Sarutobi's there and the entire Konohan military but still, they were weakened recently by the Nine Tail's attack. He shoud have been able to get him within the month afterward the attack or whenever Naruto gets too far from the town or any watchers of his.
246vili chapter 84 . 10/26/2013
Wow this was one epic battle. Good work, I loved the fights.
Damn, Lu Xiaong was one tough guy.
246vili chapter 83 . 10/25/2013
Time travel? Good idea. I bet it was very painfull for Orochimaru to see 'that' day again with his own eyes.
The battle is getting better and better.
Tcuisine chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
I am liking this plot it is a new concept
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